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[aid] => mick
[title] => The one who sinned
[time] => 2004-02-03 16:20:13
[hometext] => I had parts of this poem in my head for a long time then one night I woke to have these words flow from my hand as if it were not my own story. I hope you enjoy the work
[bodytext] => A world of passion exploited by A world of fashion Or could it be just one of lust. Only a thrust destroys the trust, The privacy he invaded the nightmeres he created and all the hope for the future now are faded. Although he is at fault you say you caused the bleeding for it was you who made the eyes and did things that could hypnotize. So now as you tell this story to your dad, he looks at you with disbeliving eyes, even though its not your lie. So you try to stay in this world of sadness knowing in madness that the masked man is still alive. Your scared to fall asleep, afraid of what might be? So to ease the pain you take a hit of Cocain and slowly load the Gun........ Out went the lights of life, for you commited suicide. Your father rushes in, he knows you are gone but only one thing was wrong. He had not yet to say good-bye... So off went the close one last time. As the casket was laid beneath the snow, he whispered really low, what he said you probably know, ......It was a sad so-long to a love all wrong [comments] => 1 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Melissa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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