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Array ( [sid] => 33644 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Through Space in Time [time] => 2004-02-03 09:09:53 [hometext] => This is about my afterlife, if their is such a thing [bodytext] => After the final slice,
The journey resumes
Coldness like spoon fed ice,
Travel to the darkside of the moon

Lights so haunting,
Filled with galactic beauty,
No more memories taunting,
Lived life, this is my reserved bounty

To travel to the furthest star,
See a world so simplistic yet undescribable,
An endless path goes so far,
To a place so infallible

Unspoiled beauty milky way express,
Gas formations so explicitly incredible,
A place for me to be unable to get depressed,
This image is so corporatly sellible

yet its untouched by the finger of mankind,
Hidden and completly unreachable,
Its a secret place in which forever I can hide,
A place so real its un-preachable

Words cannot describe the splender,
Images stay secret in my head,
Images unable to render,
In anything/anyone but the dead

Floating dead and alive in the milky way,
Bad memories, feelings unable to regurgitate,
But sadly I will not be able to stay,
As the doctors begin to ressusitate

Wish I could stay right here,
Wish I was still stone cold dead,
Memories begin to fade with tears,
Memories fade in my hospital bed



[comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 36 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Through Space in Time

Contributed by alecfernadez on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 09:09:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



After the final slice,
The journey resumes
Coldness like spoon fed ice,
Travel to the darkside of the moon

Lights so haunting,
Filled with galactic beauty,
No more memories taunting,
Lived life, this is my reserved bounty

To travel to the furthest star,
See a world so simplistic yet undescribable,
An endless path goes so far,
To a place so infallible

Unspoiled beauty milky way express,
Gas formations so explicitly incredible,
A place for me to be unable to get depressed,
This image is so corporatly sellible

yet its untouched by the finger of mankind,
Hidden and completly unreachable,
Its a secret place in which forever I can hide,
A place so real its un-preachable

Words cannot describe the splender,
Images stay secret in my head,
Images unable to render,
In anything/anyone but the dead

Floating dead and alive in the milky way,
Bad memories, feelings unable to regurgitate,
But sadly I will not be able to stay,
As the doctors begin to ressusitate

Wish I could stay right here,
Wish I was still stone cold dead,
Memories begin to fade with tears,
Memories fade in my hospital bed







Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-02-03 09:09:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Through Space in Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:05:16 PM AEST
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this brought tears to my eyes, awsome write!


Re: Through Space in Time (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:56:08 PM AEST
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very sad yet beautifully written. i loved this good work
Arden




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