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Array ( [sid] => 33615 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide of the Mind #2 [time] => 2004-02-02 23:55:32 [hometext] => This is part two of suicide of the mind. Cant figure out how to get the images to the left of the text. sorry all. Any suggestions or help, plz send me a msg.. Disenchanted [bodytext] =>



neeling I stay so the drop will be soft
nife in my left hand
neeling I stay so the drop will be soft
arma will be bland






look straight down to my left hand
n sight, my trusty knife
look straight down to my right hand
n sight, my so called life






iving was supposed to be worthwhile
ies, of course, prevailed
iving was supposed to be worthwhile
ife, of course, I've failed






etting myself go through life like this
oosely getting by
etting myself go through life like this
ive rather than die?






y knife now making contact with my skin
y skin begins to part
y knife now making contact with my skin
y life has fallen apart






ventually my blood is sapped from the body which it came
veryone mourns but no one cares for me
ventually my blood is sapped from the body which it came
veryone has proven, I was not meant to be...


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Suicide of the Mind #2

Contributed by Disenchanted_Poet on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:55:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry







neeling I stay so the drop will be soft
nife in my left hand
neeling I stay so the drop will be soft
arma will be bland






look straight down to my left hand
n sight, my trusty knife
look straight down to my right hand
n sight, my so called life






iving was supposed to be worthwhile
ies, of course, prevailed
iving was supposed to be worthwhile
ife, of course, I've failed






etting myself go through life like this
oosely getting by
etting myself go through life like this
ive rather than die?






y knife now making contact with my skin
y skin begins to part
y knife now making contact with my skin
y life has fallen apart






ventually my blood is sapped from the body which it came
veryone mourns but no one cares for me
ventually my blood is sapped from the body which it came
veryone has proven, I was not meant to be...






Copyright © Disenchanted_Poet ... [ 2004-02-02 23:55:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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