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crying
sadness
happiness
laughter
smiles
frowns
anger
joy
friends
enimies
fights
hugs
comfort
distance
seperation
closeness
partners
ex's
depression
sorrow
falling
fallen
fell
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path through life

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:33:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

babies
crying
sadness
happiness
laughter
smiles
frowns
anger
joy
friends
enimies
fights
hugs
comfort
distance
seperation
closeness
partners
ex's
depression
sorrow
falling
fallen
fell

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-02-02 18:33:23]
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Re: path through life (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:43:17 PM AEST
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hey tam
i really like this one, the use of opposite and associates is really temping to the eye and mind, great expression hehe (especially for someone that was just bored lol)

all the best hun

Luke
xxxx

Re: path through life (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterat_Zool on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 07:23:39 PM AEST
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oh, i love this style... this is one of my favorite forms to write in... I think the poem fits the title very well, going through all of the stages of like... the ending seems somehow sad though to me... it makes me feel like crying at this person's funeral... how grand it is that so few words can draw out such feeling... keep it up, your friend, Butterat Zool.

Re: path through life (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:39:44 AM AEST
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had to read this one a few times..... went from babies to ex's. babies crying and and sorrow at the end.. very very creative. very good.... wished I was a poet like you... strait to the point and it nothing else could be added.. sandy

Re: path through life (User Rating: 1 )
by jono on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 06:30:56 AM AEST
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well done strange order of words

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