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Array ( [sid] => 33553 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Requiem [time] => 2004-02-02 15:47:24 [hometext] => Written with the same pen as 'Unafraid'. That pen is psychotic. Don't try to draw meaning out of this one - just float along with it. [bodytext] => Float on
An emerald sky
Don't care
Life passed by
Dream of
All you love
While you're
On clouds above

Look there
Life's not fair
Your gem-
Dream's requiem.

Your mind's
Gone and away
You don't
Know what may
Catch you
If you fall
Don't cry
When they call

Look there
Life's not fair
Your gem-
Dream's requiem. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Eve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Requiem

Contributed by Eve on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:47:24 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Float on
An emerald sky
Don't care
Life passed by
Dream of
All you love
While you're
On clouds above

Look there
Life's not fair
Your gem-
Dream's requiem.

Your mind's
Gone and away
You don't
Know what may
Catch you
If you fall
Don't cry
When they call

Look there
Life's not fair
Your gem-
Dream's requiem.

Copyright © Eve ... [ 2004-02-02 15:47:24]
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Re: Requiem (User Rating: 1 )
by winged on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 04:17:22 PM AEST
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I like it

Re: Requiem (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:25:45 PM AEST
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As do I, winged, as do I . . .

Nicely done. I kinda wished there was someone else nearby who could've read it aloud till me while I closed my eyes-- it seemed to need that type of setting. All in all, though, very purrrrty. Can I borrow your pen? ;-)

--Nora

Re: Requiem (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 02:18:18 AM AEST
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interesting... float was a good word to describe it...

it resonates well, partially because i love the word requiem

Re: Requiem (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:45:15 AM AEST
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Hmmm...never lose that pen, it has been the catalyst for some awesome poetry. I wish I could sprout some wings and live this poem.

One last thought: I think this would make a great song; a slow, haunting tune comes to mind...

Keep writing, or have your pen switched with a "suck" pen,
-V.S.

Re: Requiem (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:20:00 PM AEST
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this is a cool peom, great visualism

Re: Requiem (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:16:54 PM AEST
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This is nice. The visualism is excellent. Well done.
Andrew

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