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Array ( [sid] => 33551 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FIRST LOVE [time] => 2004-02-02 15:27:31 [hometext] => Think we all remember our first love......................... [bodytext] => Thoughts came to mind as she reminisced
Of her first love and that first sweet kiss
Down the dale wood over by the stream
Finally in his arms this was her dream

Wrote him love letters and dreamed all day
Of his loving kisses not her school essay
His name was etched upon her heart
Engraved like a picture a state of art

He took over her mind a picture of his face
Longing for his touch and sweet embrace
She loved him those dreamy days so demure
Was enraptured enticed through his allure

Her heart was beating so fast at last
As they lay together on the velvet grass
Her stomach was turning over inside
Kisses so gently she could have cried

Her body was not her own nor mind
Shaking inside their hearts intertwined
She felt so faint her head was spinning
Is this how love feels in the beginning

She waited so long for him to kiss her lips
Swirling in darkness now a total eclipse
So hungry for love she needed him so
Feelings from such a long time ago

His gentle soft touch reduced her to tears
She had waited for his love for many years
The words I love you was what she wanted to hear
As they gently made love his words were sincere


Love Angelxxx
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FIRST LOVE

Contributed by sweetangeluk on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Thoughts came to mind as she reminisced
Of her first love and that first sweet kiss
Down the dale wood over by the stream
Finally in his arms this was her dream

Wrote him love letters and dreamed all day
Of his loving kisses not her school essay
His name was etched upon her heart
Engraved like a picture a state of art

He took over her mind a picture of his face
Longing for his touch and sweet embrace
She loved him those dreamy days so demure
Was enraptured enticed through his allure

Her heart was beating so fast at last
As they lay together on the velvet grass
Her stomach was turning over inside
Kisses so gently she could have cried

Her body was not her own nor mind
Shaking inside their hearts intertwined
She felt so faint her head was spinning
Is this how love feels in the beginning

She waited so long for him to kiss her lips
Swirling in darkness now a total eclipse
So hungry for love she needed him so
Feelings from such a long time ago

His gentle soft touch reduced her to tears
She had waited for his love for many years
The words I love you was what she wanted to hear
As they gently made love his words were sincere


Love Angelxxx




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Re: FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by harshreality on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:46:46 PM AEST
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absolutly beautiful.


Re: FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:33:47 PM AEST
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Nice work, very touching and soothing.
First love is a fascinating thing !!

steve


Re: FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:45:47 AM AEST
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This reminded me of my first kiss....from my first love.... I remember saying to myself.... Is THIS what all the fuss is about!!! But after the second one, wow!!! there was no holding back!!! lol
Thanks for sharing this..
Jenni


Re: FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:42:02 PM AEST
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Perfect. A piece to be always remembered and cherished by all! A love writ large across the Heavens!! How I have felt this! Incredible! You write these words of such splendor and eternal love so beautifully! You are truly a poet, my friend! ENCORE! A sweet proclaimation of love. I feel like I can relate to all of your poems, and what you express in them! I love this!! Absolutely magnificent. Your words shall forever be etched in the confinements of my mind! Merci beaucoup once more for showing us a glimpse of your luminous soul! Pen on, angel.

Fleur de Sang




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