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Array ( [sid] => 33539 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Will I remain Anonymous? [time] => 2004-02-02 13:11:27 [hometext] => About being alone, as if sreaming in a crouded room and no one can hear it [bodytext] => Have you ever felt that if you cried,
And as you fell onto someone's shoulders,
They would move away from you?

Do you feel,
That they wouldn't wipe the tear from your cheek

Do you think that people look down on you?
That you are not up to their standards?

I do...

I feel,
That there will never be a shoulder to cry on,
No one to wipe the tear from my cheek,
To tell me that everything will be ok.

I feel,
That I am unable to see eye to eye with my friends,
That I will always be stuck on a lower pedestal,
Never able to reach the top,
always in second place...

I feel,
That I will always remain a nobody,
A nameless face,
Just another breathing creature on this planet,
Left to walk alone.

I will remain anonymous... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 32 [informant] => IntelectualPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Will I remain Anonymous?

Contributed by IntelectualPoet on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 01:11:27 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Have you ever felt that if you cried,
And as you fell onto someone's shoulders,
They would move away from you?

Do you feel,
That they wouldn't wipe the tear from your cheek

Do you think that people look down on you?
That you are not up to their standards?

I do...

I feel,
That there will never be a shoulder to cry on,
No one to wipe the tear from my cheek,
To tell me that everything will be ok.

I feel,
That I am unable to see eye to eye with my friends,
That I will always be stuck on a lower pedestal,
Never able to reach the top,
always in second place...

I feel,
That I will always remain a nobody,
A nameless face,
Just another breathing creature on this planet,
Left to walk alone.

I will remain anonymous...

Copyright © IntelectualPoet ... [ 2004-02-02 13:11:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Will I remain Anonymous? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 02:52:49 PM AEST
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I understand how you feel sometimes I feel the same way when no one is paying attention to me weather at school, at home, anywhere but I just talk to them about it and they understand how I feel so I would talk about the issue with someone maybe a school councellor

Re: Will I remain Anonymous? (User Rating: 1 )
by intelectualpoet on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 07:28:19 PM AEST
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Thanks for the advise, But I was just having a bad night and just felt that E1 should be paying attn. to me and not what they wanted to...No worries though but thank you for caring ;-)

Re: Will I remain Anonymous? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:01:29 PM AEST
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this was deep man I've felt like that a lot. Hope u know longer feel like this although it was a good poem. Keep on writing.

Bobo (Joel)

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