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Array ( [sid] => 33457 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What For? [time] => 2004-02-01 17:38:48 [hometext] => I said no more. [bodytext] => hey girl, you're coming round
the more of you, the more my head spins round
it's like a nursery rhyme all the time...

spent on you and i have no money to spare
still it's true, you know i didn't care
but that was then now there's something in the air
a little different than an ordered pair

i've changed but you still come across my hair
it's not true, you know that i don't care
that was then now this is now a different air
i'll breathe in myself outside of a pair

what for...
no more you should know what i'm going for

hey i'm over here
yea you're out there
what's the problem?
why should i care?

could someone else please tell me the status?
i keep on hearing from your apparatus
so pleased that you're still such a tease
the things you do still brings me to my knees

how much more could you be in my glance?
tread softly and still i'm taking a chance
we done the dance now wasn't that enough
almost feels like you want another romance

what for...
i closed the door you know whatever for

hey i'm over here
yea you're out there
what's the problem?
why should i care?
so you're in here
i'm way out there
is there a problem?
well now is there?

spent on you while i have no money to spare
still it's true, you know that i didn't care
but that was then now there's something in the air
a little different now than an ordered pair

i'm not the same but you're still in my air
it's not true, you know that i won't care
that was then now this is now a different air
i'll breathe in myself outside that old pair

what for?
well now what for?
hey girl well what for?
whatever, did you hear? i said no more. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
What For?

Contributed by remy on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 05:38:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



hey girl, you're coming round
the more of you, the more my head spins round
it's like a nursery rhyme all the time...

spent on you and i have no money to spare
still it's true, you know i didn't care
but that was then now there's something in the air
a little different than an ordered pair

i've changed but you still come across my hair
it's not true, you know that i don't care
that was then now this is now a different air
i'll breathe in myself outside of a pair

what for...
no more you should know what i'm going for

hey i'm over here
yea you're out there
what's the problem?
why should i care?

could someone else please tell me the status?
i keep on hearing from your apparatus
so pleased that you're still such a tease
the things you do still brings me to my knees

how much more could you be in my glance?
tread softly and still i'm taking a chance
we done the dance now wasn't that enough
almost feels like you want another romance

what for...
i closed the door you know whatever for

hey i'm over here
yea you're out there
what's the problem?
why should i care?
so you're in here
i'm way out there
is there a problem?
well now is there?

spent on you while i have no money to spare
still it's true, you know that i didn't care
but that was then now there's something in the air
a little different now than an ordered pair

i'm not the same but you're still in my air
it's not true, you know that i won't care
that was then now this is now a different air
i'll breathe in myself outside that old pair

what for?
well now what for?
hey girl well what for?
whatever, did you hear? i said no more.




Copyright © remy ... [ 2004-02-01 17:38:48]
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Re: What For? (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 07:42:38 PM AEST
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Wow, what a confident write this is! nice! :)


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by PRECIOUSBECKY on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 06:59:58 PM AEST
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