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Array ( [sid] => 33359 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blind [time] => 2004-01-31 19:14:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The beautyness is all around you, for all to see
How can you improve perfection?
Can you lend me some of your luck
And help this misfourtunite friend?
What was it you saw in me,
That made me stand out from them all?
Why was I the one,
You let silently into your heart?
Thank you for lending me your hand,
When I was in a time of need.
Instead of kicking me while I was down,
Like everyone else in town
You were there,
Watching while they took me away
The entire time, I couldn't get you off my mind
And how someone like you, would want a friend like me
I couldn't think of a single way
I would be able to add vaule to your life.
but thinking back on it today,
I ask myself instead, what would I do for you
Because you see,
You are everything to me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 278 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Fairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Blind

Contributed by Fairy on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:14:15 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

The beautyness is all around you, for all to see
How can you improve perfection?
Can you lend me some of your luck
And help this misfourtunite friend?
What was it you saw in me,
That made me stand out from them all?
Why was I the one,
You let silently into your heart?
Thank you for lending me your hand,
When I was in a time of need.
Instead of kicking me while I was down,
Like everyone else in town
You were there,
Watching while they took me away
The entire time, I couldn't get you off my mind
And how someone like you, would want a friend like me
I couldn't think of a single way
I would be able to add vaule to your life.
but thinking back on it today,
I ask myself instead, what would I do for you
Because you see,
You are everything to me

Copyright © Fairy ... [ 2004-01-31 19:14:15]
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Re: Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by redwest802 on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:18:10 PM AEST
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good write i liked it alot

Re: Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:51:30 PM AEST
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This was a nice poem. I think its wonderful to let someone know what they mean to you. I thought your poem had a nice flow and was overall great. The only thing I noticed that took away from the poem and in a slight way was your spelling errors. Other than that I think you did a fine job. Keep on writing! Kie

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