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Array ( [sid] => 33351 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Others view's on young youths. [time] => 2004-01-31 17:32:21 [hometext] => Just like to say that i e-mailed someone ealier who wanted some advice on some thing. if he reads this it ain't aimed at him or his son in any way, it's when i wrote to him it all got me thinking about how some people end up... [bodytext] => young youth mashed with thoughts,
young child bearly a man,
young human think's he's hard,
young man, won't berry him-self in the sand!

young youth has to be one of the lads,
he can't face up to being alone,
he has to fight,
he has to wear latest tends,
has to be right,
he won't let him-self pretend!

young youth don't do your graffiti,
young youth don't be a vandal,
young youth mustn't act like that,
young youth you look like a prat!

young man your life is dropping,
can't you see that your education is stopping!
watch your-self!
before your world ends,
bite the bullet,
they ain't good friends!
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 39 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Others view's on young youths.

Contributed by deathdrop on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 05:32:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

young youth mashed with thoughts,
young child bearly a man,
young human think's he's hard,
young man, won't berry him-self in the sand!

young youth has to be one of the lads,
he can't face up to being alone,
he has to fight,
he has to wear latest tends,
has to be right,
he won't let him-self pretend!

young youth don't do your graffiti,
young youth don't be a vandal,
young youth mustn't act like that,
young youth you look like a prat!

young man your life is dropping,
can't you see that your education is stopping!
watch your-self!
before your world ends,
bite the bullet,
they ain't good friends!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-01-31 17:32:21]
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Re: Others view's on young youths. (User Rating: 1 )
by amandadawn1982 on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:10:27 PM AEST
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good poem, the repeative wording fit well. Made the poem a little more like you were talking to him not just thinking about him. Keep up the good work
Amanda

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