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Array ( [sid] => 3330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Car Sick [time] => 2002-09-04 05:57:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Country driving
Out of town
Try to keep
My dinner down

Cruiser engines
Subtle purr
Soon invokes
A gastric stir

Suck a mint
Stay the bile
We’ll be home
In just a while

Keep my head
Between my knees
Lower window
Draw the breeze

Damn too late
Handle broke
Back of Daddy’s neck
Gets soaked

Spoiled day
So very sad
I couldn’t help it
Sorry Dad!

One week on
Another roam
Dad suggests
I stay at home
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Car Sick

Contributed by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 05:57:47 AM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

Country driving
Out of town
Try to keep
My dinner down

Cruiser engines
Subtle purr
Soon invokes
A gastric stir

Suck a mint
Stay the bile
We’ll be home
In just a while

Keep my head
Between my knees
Lower window
Draw the breeze

Damn too late
Handle broke
Back of Daddy’s neck
Gets soaked

Spoiled day
So very sad
I couldn’t help it
Sorry Dad!

One week on
Another roam
Dad suggests
I stay at home

Copyright Â© Terry_Stephen_Driscoll ... [ 2002-09-04 05:57:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Car Sick (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 06:10:00 AM AEST
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LMAO!!!...this reminded me of the day we drove to Omaha on vacation. Sissy was so car sick and pukin all over the place the whole way there....oh my goodness did the car sure stink!! I love this one...
xoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxo

Re: Car Sick (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 10:09:13 PM AEST
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Giggle ! Lovely light humour here Terry...my son did the deed down the back of my neck once...yukk
Lots of love
Chrissie x

Re: Car Sick (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 02:25:14 AM AEST
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Dear Terry,
Adorable! But-Yeuch!!! roflmao!
always Nessa

Re: Car Sick (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 07:55:14 PM AEST
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enjoyable write..brought me back to my childhood

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