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Array ( [sid] => 33272 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2004-01-30 23:16:33 [hometext] => need a title. Please leave what you think and a decent title if you can think of one. Thanx. [bodytext] => Words inside
screaming so loud.

Wanting to escape
wanting to be heard.

But so I stand
speechless now.

Unable to grasp
the words I heard.

The joy within
wanting to be felt,

But my mind
keeps it all in check.

For all this time
had taught me things.

Worst of them all
not to show emotion.

"The streets are rough"
"They'll kill you if you cry."

All of this
was told to me

By those who
took me in,

To be one of
their own.

But I can't hide
Just what I feel.

Not anymore
not from you.

No gang in the world
could keep me from you.

Nothing can separate
a love strong as ours. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Elf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Untitled

Contributed by Elf on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 11:16:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Words inside
screaming so loud.

Wanting to escape
wanting to be heard.

But so I stand
speechless now.

Unable to grasp
the words I heard.

The joy within
wanting to be felt,

But my mind
keeps it all in check.

For all this time
had taught me things.

Worst of them all
not to show emotion.

"The streets are rough"
"They'll kill you if you cry."

All of this
was told to me

By those who
took me in,

To be one of
their own.

But I can't hide
Just what I feel.

Not anymore
not from you.

No gang in the world
could keep me from you.

Nothing can separate
a love strong as ours.

Copyright © Elf ... [ 2004-01-30 23:16:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Elf on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 11:29:15 PM AEST
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actually supposed to be love/romantic poetry. My mouse slipped.
-*Valen*-

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 11:35:40 PM AEST
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Title... Poet's Cry? I don't know.
Take care, Elf.
David

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 11:54:08 PM AEST
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awesome. call it "Hidden".

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:47:15 AM AEST
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Standing Speechless; Words Inside; Feelings I Can't Hide: But my favorite....The Joy Within.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Elf on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:29:24 PM AEST
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New Name; The Joy Within.

Thanx whoever posted that to me. I dunno who you are, but sometimes it's the faceless stranger that helps the most.
-*Valen*-

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