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[aid] => mick
[title] => An answer wanted
[time] => 2004-01-30 21:27:23
[hometext] => This one is suppose to be about my friend and his girl, but also could be about me.... (*shrug*)
[bodytext] => I want to know, baby,
Why do you treat me so?
So many times I called,
And you answer not;
So many messages were sent,
Yet, I waited longer….
I want to know, baby,
Why do you punish me so?
You made me a promise,
Though you never kept it;
You give me a dream,
Then smash it, into thousand of pieces….
I need to know, baby,
Are you playing a game on me?
You apart when I approach,
You toy my feeling around your fingertips,
My heart is torn and bleed,
You left it to dry under the moonlight,
And that cutting breeze….
I am dying to know, baby,
What’s behind your untouchable heart?
Are you just playing hard to get?
Or am I chasing after a shadow?
All these tears,
Are more than I can take,
Give me a answer,
Show me a way!
So I may pull myself away,
From such sorrow and pain!
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 467
[topic] => 48
[informant] => whisper-of-night
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[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
)
An answer wanted
Contributed by
whisper-of-night
on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 09:27:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want to know, baby,
Why do you treat me so?
So many times I called,
And you answer not;
So many messages were sent,
Yet, I waited longer….
I want to know, baby,
Why do you punish me so?
You made me a promise,
Though you never kept it;
You give me a dream,
Then smash it, into thousand of pieces….
I need to know, baby,
Are you playing a game on me?
You apart when I approach,
You toy my feeling around your fingertips,
My heart is torn and bleed,
You left it to dry under the moonlight,
And that cutting breeze….
I am dying to know, baby,
What’s behind your untouchable heart?
Are you just playing hard to get?
Or am I chasing after a shadow?
All these tears,
Are more than I can take,
Give me a answer,
Show me a way!
So I may pull myself away,
From such sorrow and pain!
Copyright ©
whisper-of-night
... [
2004-01-30 21:27:23]
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Re: An answer wanted
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by Letting_Go on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:18:02 AM AEST
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| Some people just don't have the decency to tell the person why they are treating them so, why they are avoiding them so. This poem is one of the things my heart is about. In life people come and go and I personally haven't gotten used to it yet, just leaves me with unanswered questions and hatred and anger. I went throuugh this recent;y AGAIN and this submittence from you was timely for me. Good write. |
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Re: An answer wanted
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by Jolly on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:26:07 PM AEST
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Ever heard that country song...it has lyrics that say " the phone still ain't ringin' so I'm assumin it's still you?...For some reason your poem reminded me of those lyrics.
Oh Cyrano.... |
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Re: An answer wanted
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 03:18:14 PM AEST
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Oh what a poem! Full of pain and bitterness. It makes me think about somethings *sigh* ..........Keep writing! Amazing writing!
Anne :D |
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Re: An answer wanted
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 09:47:15 PM AEST
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Great job! This is very emotional and heartfelt.
I hope things get better for you. Keep writing!
Blessings
Andrew
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Re: An answer wanted
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by Sexygirl on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:43:30 PM AEST
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| This is so very true...You hear about this kind thing all the time...I really don't know why some people can be soooooooo cold...You have captured it so well...sorry for the pain your going through...wish you all the best... |
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Re: An answer wanted
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by Chilibear on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:55:03 PM AEST
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| WOW! that poem is really good. I know how you feel... But you already know all about that!Keep it up! |
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Re: An answer wanted
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:20:06 AM AEST
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i dealt with this before you can ell in my poetry.....it was hard but i drops things completely with the person
keep writing it does you good |
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Re: An answer wanted
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:06:40 PM AEST
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:( I can image what that feels like...
You catured the feeling amazingly...
well done
-WWD |
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Re: An answer wanted
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by morelikelyrics on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:48:52 PM AEST
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This doesnt remind me of a song... This could definitely BE a song... and an amazing one at that... so emotive, so meaningful, and it flows so well!
Just fabulous, well done!!
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: An answer wanted
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by Chilibear on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:28:28 PM AEST
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Awwww, Wen that's so sweet. I just thought i'd come read some of your poetry. I miss talking to you. Please email me when you get this!
Love Always, Chili |
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Re: An answer wanted
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by monkey on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:21:48 AM AEST
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Hello My Mister Baboon ~
How have you been? From your poetry I am guessing not so well.. I miss talking to you.. It's been a long while.. Be sure to write me back when you get this.. Let me know if you are alright, I'm worried. I've been thinking about you lately. Great write. Miss you tons, Hope to talk to you soon!
Love ~
Missy Monkey |
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