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Array ( [sid] => 33263 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Too Bad [time] => 2004-01-30 20:16:52 [hometext] => they wouldn't let me write ****** with two s's [bodytext] => You have alot of nerve
showing up like this
i told you i never wanted to see your face
till the day we both die
and now you want me back
sorry i can't do that
you know that saying
"Everything heals over time"
well i guess i haven't had enough
i'm still **** at all that stuff
that stuff that made me wonder
if we would stay together
that stuff that made me cry all in the night
that stuff i thought was love
but now i know better
and your're not getting me back
not now
not ever

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 24 [informant] => pyrochick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Too Bad

Contributed by pyrochick on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:16:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

You have alot of nerve
showing up like this
i told you i never wanted to see your face
till the day we both die
and now you want me back
sorry i can't do that
you know that saying
"Everything heals over time"
well i guess i haven't had enough
i'm still **** at all that stuff
that stuff that made me wonder
if we would stay together
that stuff that made me cry all in the night
that stuff i thought was love
but now i know better
and your're not getting me back
not now
not ever

Copyright © pyrochick ... [ 2004-01-30 20:16:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Too Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:28:32 PM AEST
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well *****t is actually spelled "*****" but yeah, nice write anyways :P

Re: Too Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:48:57 PM AEST
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nice one gary u dildo. comment on the common spelling mistake, *****. brilliant poem, so much emotion here, if this is your life well done for not giving in, I wouldnt. Its a shame some people can not treat people right but I guess thats the way it has to be. Good luck with future men, we're not all bad!!! lol

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John x

Re: Too Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 09:26:19 PM AEST
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i personally liked this poem good write!

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