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Array ( [sid] => 33262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Sweet Release [time] => 2004-01-30 20:12:46 [hometext] => Waiting for death... [bodytext] => Hurt time and time again
By so many people
This world has let me down

A loneliness that won't subside
The inevitable fate
Of the knife across my skin
I lack hope
The will to live

Slowly I die
But you are blinded
You cannot see
This young girl
Who has seen too much already
Felt too much

I'll crawl into the dark
Beaten by harsh words
Insane I must be
My thought are so mixed up

Too late
It's too late to be saved
I've fallen
Now I will wait for the sweet kiss of death
My sweet release from everything
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My Sweet Release

Contributed by Night_Child on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Hurt time and time again
By so many people
This world has let me down

A loneliness that won't subside
The inevitable fate
Of the knife across my skin
I lack hope
The will to live

Slowly I die
But you are blinded
You cannot see
This young girl
Who has seen too much already
Felt too much

I'll crawl into the dark
Beaten by harsh words
Insane I must be
My thought are so mixed up

Too late
It's too late to be saved
I've fallen
Now I will wait for the sweet kiss of death
My sweet release from everything

Copyright © Night_Child ... [ 2004-01-30 20:12:46]
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Re: My Sweet Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 03:16:07 PM AEST
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Oh very dark, I know what this poem says written something like this myself, hope you passed this depressing state. I liked this poem very expressive
Anne :D

Re: My Sweet Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Fairy on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 01:13:38 PM AEST
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I wanted to say I'm sorry.. reading this reminds me so much of myself that it's scary.. I know what it's like to only be able to get any feelings by cutting.. I think I started doing it because I was convinced I was numb to all emotions, except the torments I was feeling inside of my mind.. I wish I could take your pain away, no one, should have to feel this way.. trust me, there will be brighter days

Re: My Sweet Release (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 03:12:07 PM AEST
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what a beautiful, if painful, poem.. i wrote a poem called 'sweet release' but its nowhere near as good as this..
charlotte x_x_x

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