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lights out.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:08:24 AM in AEST
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A gun point,
then a loude sound,
we saw sparks fly,
as we turn an run.
to no avail another mother child is done.
as he felt the bullet,he inhail,
kicking and asking why?why? was this done
tell that brother he as a son,
i forgave him.
let my life be his new beganning,
as he close his eyes a smiling came across
his face.it was so peaceful it strength my faith. yes am
useful.live life and don't not waite,cause time will tell if you have faith.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
... [
2004-01-30 08:08:24]
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Re: lights out.
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:30:40 AM AEST
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Very sad!
I lived in Spanaway Washington awhile and my sister works at a juvenille facility in Washington state.
I know what a drive bye is 4 sure.
It was a tipical day gunshots firing day-n-nite.
good writing!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: lights out.
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by bluoreo on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 02:27:07 PM AEST
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Good write. It is sad that things like this happen everyday.
-Eric |
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Re: lights out.
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:52:14 PM AEST
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| oh richard this is so sad, from your recent poetry it seems you knew him, i hope all is well, am here if you want to talk, the ending in your poem is one of the prettiest ive read:) hugs n' love nessa |
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