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Love don't care who heart it broke
Contributed by
harmoni
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:45:12 AM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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When you think the world is with you.
When you think everything all right.
When you think you can love again.
Something take flight.
Love don't care who heart it broke.
Only to take what it can.
Sometimes love is confuse.
And it forget where it is.
To stand.
You both got to feel the same.
It's not a one way street.
So when you give your heart again.
Makes sure it's great.
Copyright ©
harmoni
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2004-01-30 07:45:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love don't care who heart it broke
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:50:04 PM AEST (User
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I love the line "it's not a one way street". Nice comparison.
Good job =)
God bless,
Ellen
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Re: Love don't care who heart it broke
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:51:05 AM AEST (User
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Very creative.
thank u so much for your comment on my work.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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