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Sticks and Stones.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 06:35:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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my stonned body carries anger,
my aching jaw carries hate,
my frozen fist carries anger,
my ruthless aggression carries my fate!
pocking sticks dig in my back,
pocking fingers into my head,
pocking****! i've had enough!
pocking, prodding,
it's all the same!
are you happy with what you've done to me?
does it make yo feel great?
that i'm in such a state!
that i can't breath,
that i can't sleep at night????
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Re: Sticks and Stones.
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:28:55 AM AEST (User
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I hear u. I'm pretty upset myself at the moment so I comprenda very well what u mean.
Great constuctive way 2 cool down.
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: Sticks and Stones.
(User Rating: 1 ) by drgnreborn on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:39:07 AM AEST (User
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Great write! I can see the pain in your poem. There is a lot of anger here, but that's just another form of pain. I hope life gets better for you: I'm sure you deserve it. Good luck and God bless. |
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