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Should Be
Contributed by
Philophobia7
on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 03:40:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Love should be two young souls
Who Cross eachother's paths
And become eternally tangled
But life isn't how it should be
Nor the love that exists in it
Copyright ©
Philophobia7
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2004-01-30 03:40:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Should Be
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 04:02:41 AM AEST (User
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I've got so many thoughts on this, don't know whether to agree or affirm you in your thoughtful writing... good stuff you got here, spot on!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Should Be
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 05:39:18 AM AEST (User
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Awesome, short, powerfull!
very good!
huggs, luvm
emy |
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