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Array ( [sid] => 33150 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Quick Make To [time] => 2004-01-29 20:22:57 [hometext] => i was in a stump, i got out it with this........................... [bodytext] => Quick so make to decisions and
even slower to out break minds tricks your own self knew it dead, knew it alive, knew it in the womb, was its father, its mother, its doom
Quick make to hate me
just a quickie big an something little side on respiratory blissful deadly sea ground feel
Quick make to stick to my 3 second self
banging on itchy air, "Quit that, you little honkey!" I'm already a phone, so erase the chalk
Quick make sense no to
"Start that, jew, start that" yeah my synagogue plays the funk music and ties up tigers in velvet
I’m here with my acid in check, my sneakers with tires, iv’s in my toes up through my brain
I shaved my legs today, but my ice pack feels the same, freaking caveman is still eating my cheeto’s, “Ey buddy! You suck!”
Quicktime
Freaking awful
Quick so make to happy depressed mood transition
now I’m sort of slappy, Pt buger flip the viking, the viking, the viking
Erik the red found marlyn monroe out on a deck, 7 of spades, not exactly a good card
Dead man’s hand is really just a joke, the Dead man founded a lawsuit, it goes downhill from there, make love?, make love!, well if you an optimist, me I’m neither, so its not so much make love, more like funky body motion, go good or bad, yeah it depends on the ring of fire in Kobe, Japan, they have good thai food,
Quick to up give I [comments] => 0 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 43 [informant] => snow24 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Quick Make To

Contributed by snow24 on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:22:57 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Quick so make to decisions and
even slower to out break minds tricks your own self knew it dead, knew it alive, knew it in the womb, was its father, its mother, its doom
Quick make to hate me
just a quickie big an something little side on respiratory blissful deadly sea ground feel
Quick make to stick to my 3 second self
banging on itchy air, "Quit that, you little honkey!" I'm already a phone, so erase the chalk
Quick make sense no to
"Start that, jew, start that" yeah my synagogue plays the funk music and ties up tigers in velvet
I’m here with my acid in check, my sneakers with tires, iv’s in my toes up through my brain
I shaved my legs today, but my ice pack feels the same, freaking caveman is still eating my cheeto’s, “Ey buddy! You suck!”
Quicktime
Freaking awful
Quick so make to happy depressed mood transition
now I’m sort of slappy, Pt buger flip the viking, the viking, the viking
Erik the red found marlyn monroe out on a deck, 7 of spades, not exactly a good card
Dead man’s hand is really just a joke, the Dead man founded a lawsuit, it goes downhill from there, make love?, make love!, well if you an optimist, me I’m neither, so its not so much make love, more like funky body motion, go good or bad, yeah it depends on the ring of fire in Kobe, Japan, they have good thai food,
Quick to up give I




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