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Array ( [sid] => 33107 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => living hell is worst than death! [time] => 2004-01-29 14:05:24 [hometext] => This was just what happened today in school... and people wonder why i don't wanna go! i swear if they start one more time!!!!....?????? [bodytext] => i'm late to school,
already feeling emotionally cold,
in first lesson, sarah sits in my place,
as i pass she smiles, with hatred upon her face,
at the end of the lesson she plays round with marie-lise,
and then she decides she'll smack into me,
now i've taken this sh**, for far to long,
so i push her back, as hard as she'd just done.

mmm! that made her jump,
she didn't she it comming,
now don't say she didn't deserve it!
all this time when she kept me burning!
burning and burning in a fiery blaze,
all of my hurting kept me alight for days and days!

it wasn't done all that hard,
i should have smacked her head in!
but lets not forget that the class was still around,
as witnesses of devil's justice!

for the rest of the day,
she did no more,
but that don't excuse the rest of the bit**es,
in school!
you should always iggnore them,
and never give in hope,
but there all such d**k-heads!
no wonder my life can't cope!

still... i did nothing more,
then i get a good mark in D.T.
THEN STARVE MY SELF AGAIN AT LUNCH,
then get pi**ed off in science...

while a girl got removed from maths,
while my friend got gobbed on,
and smacked a door on some ones head,
and my friend,
is planning to gob on that girls locker,
(and all round the pad-lock),
no wonder they want her dead!

see this is what i have to live with, everyday,
see this is why ive skived for 2 days, this week!
and 2 days last week,
and odd lessons here and there,
AND POEPLE ARE WONDERING,
"WHY I DON'T WANNA GO THERE?"

don't you just love school????????????
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 6 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
living hell is worst than death!

Contributed by deathdrop on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 02:05:24 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



i'm late to school,
already feeling emotionally cold,
in first lesson, sarah sits in my place,
as i pass she smiles, with hatred upon her face,
at the end of the lesson she plays round with marie-lise,
and then she decides she'll smack into me,
now i've taken this sh**, for far to long,
so i push her back, as hard as she'd just done.

mmm! that made her jump,
she didn't she it comming,
now don't say she didn't deserve it!
all this time when she kept me burning!
burning and burning in a fiery blaze,
all of my hurting kept me alight for days and days!

it wasn't done all that hard,
i should have smacked her head in!
but lets not forget that the class was still around,
as witnesses of devil's justice!

for the rest of the day,
she did no more,
but that don't excuse the rest of the bit**es,
in school!
you should always iggnore them,
and never give in hope,
but there all such d**k-heads!
no wonder my life can't cope!

still... i did nothing more,
then i get a good mark in D.T.
THEN STARVE MY SELF AGAIN AT LUNCH,
then get pi**ed off in science...

while a girl got removed from maths,
while my friend got gobbed on,
and smacked a door on some ones head,
and my friend,
is planning to gob on that girls locker,
(and all round the pad-lock),
no wonder they want her dead!

see this is what i have to live with, everyday,
see this is why ive skived for 2 days, this week!
and 2 days last week,
and odd lessons here and there,
AND POEPLE ARE WONDERING,
"WHY I DON'T WANNA GO THERE?"

don't you just love school????????????




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Re: living hell is worst than death! (User Rating: 1 )
by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 02:35:02 PM AEST
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I feel what your saying because I’m in high school too but I think you could of made this poem a little better if you would of spent more time on it, but generally I thought it was good and I enjoyed reading it.


Re: living hell is worst than death! (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:04:20 PM AEST
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people can be *ssholes just push them back more often, stand up for yourself, bullies are cowards (trust me I used to be one) good poem hope u released most of your anger.

Bobo (Joel)




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