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Array ( [sid] => 33094 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just a thought [time] => 2004-01-29 11:16:32 [hometext] => this poem goes over a week in time [bodytext] => JUST A THOUGHT

Dec 10, 03

You are ****** me the **** off I'm sick of hearin your voices, they said that people who are reborn choose their life what the hell was I thinkin to pick them I must been out of my mind because it would be a cold day in hell before I choose u

Gettin on my last nerve I wish I can leave now time going by to ****** slow I'm not makin enough ****** money.

Yall just don't know what u are doing to me 1:27 am

dec 19, 03

My parent said I fuss to much but it my cry for help but their are to blind to understand or notice their daugther is in pain who very unhappy with her life

If she thought that she didn't have any change at all she would end it but I don't want to go to hell either only if their care, God I'm going crazy I have to GET OUT no one care about my cries for help, believe me I'm tying help myself but I can't . I'm in this hell on earth tryin to help myself I need my life. My Future is being ****, My heart feel like it under a thousand pound rock.

I can't sleep at nite cause I'm tire of this bed this bedroom this town I need to be free why can't anybody see that why can't anyone get me out this hell why do I have to scream so hard I'm not happy I'm miseable writing out my pain is no longer helping me anymore what do I have to do. Do u have to see a lifeless body on the bed with those dead dark brown eyes lookin back at u.


Remy Maskantinio
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Just a thought

Contributed by remi on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 11:16:32 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



JUST A THOUGHT

Dec 10, 03

You are ****** me the **** off I'm sick of hearin your voices, they said that people who are reborn choose their life what the hell was I thinkin to pick them I must been out of my mind because it would be a cold day in hell before I choose u

Gettin on my last nerve I wish I can leave now time going by to ****** slow I'm not makin enough ****** money.

Yall just don't know what u are doing to me 1:27 am

dec 19, 03

My parent said I fuss to much but it my cry for help but their are to blind to understand or notice their daugther is in pain who very unhappy with her life

If she thought that she didn't have any change at all she would end it but I don't want to go to hell either only if their care, God I'm going crazy I have to GET OUT no one care about my cries for help, believe me I'm tying help myself but I can't . I'm in this hell on earth tryin to help myself I need my life. My Future is being ****, My heart feel like it under a thousand pound rock.

I can't sleep at nite cause I'm tire of this bed this bedroom this town I need to be free why can't anybody see that why can't anyone get me out this hell why do I have to scream so hard I'm not happy I'm miseable writing out my pain is no longer helping me anymore what do I have to do. Do u have to see a lifeless body on the bed with those dead dark brown eyes lookin back at u.


Remy Maskantinio




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Re: Just a thought (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 11:39:12 AM AEST
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This is a very sad write. I can feel your pain. I truely hope things get better for you.


Re: Just a thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:08:07 AM AEST
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Wow... This is angry. This was sorta a far shot from you last one. Very well written though in anger.




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