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To inspire you
Let you draw me on your paper
Forever kept in your little book of drawings
As I will be forever kept in your heart

I will bare my soul to you
Everything of mine is yours
Just love me forever

I lay there
All thats heard is the stroke of your pencil
As you pore your heart into a portrait of me
Do not say a word
I feel your love
I want to hold this moment in my heart forever

You stand up
And slide the picture into your book
Kneeling beside me
You press your lips against mine
'I love you' you whisper
I will lock this moment in my heart

An undying love
Never broken
This love will live
Until the end of time [comments] => 3 [counter] => 301 [topic] => 2 [informant] => night_child [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

An Undying Love

Contributed by night_child on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:07:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I long to be your muse
To inspire you
Let you draw me on your paper
Forever kept in your little book of drawings
As I will be forever kept in your heart

I will bare my soul to you
Everything of mine is yours
Just love me forever

I lay there
All thats heard is the stroke of your pencil
As you pore your heart into a portrait of me
Do not say a word
I feel your love
I want to hold this moment in my heart forever

You stand up
And slide the picture into your book
Kneeling beside me
You press your lips against mine
'I love you' you whisper
I will lock this moment in my heart

An undying love
Never broken
This love will live
Until the end of time

Copyright © night_child ... [ 2004-01-28 20:07:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: An Undying Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:23:30 PM AEST
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Beautiful...

Re: An Undying Love (User Rating: 1 )
by CountryGirl on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:15:24 PM AEST
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Kie said it all...beautiful.

Re: An Undying Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Bugoron on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 02:54:34 PM AEST
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I concur with the above comments, indded, it is a beautiful work.

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