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Array ( [sid] => 33030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without You [time] => 2004-01-28 19:58:44 [hometext] => My feelings about not being with the one I love... [bodytext] => Without you
I am nothing
I've cried so much
Sometimes I can't even cry
The sadness is too overwhelming

I've tried to move on
Oh God how I've tried
But I need you

I'm sorry for anything I've done
I'll love you for eternity
Even though I mean nothing to you

Please just let me die
I'm so alone
Without you

A looming darkness closes in on me
Tears stream down my face
The candle slowly burns away
As I fade into the dark

I have my whole life ahead of me
I have everything and nothing at the same time
Without you

So empty
So cold
There is nothing left for me
Without you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 22 [informant] => night_child [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Without You

Contributed by night_child on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:58:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Without you
I am nothing
I've cried so much
Sometimes I can't even cry
The sadness is too overwhelming

I've tried to move on
Oh God how I've tried
But I need you

I'm sorry for anything I've done
I'll love you for eternity
Even though I mean nothing to you

Please just let me die
I'm so alone
Without you

A looming darkness closes in on me
Tears stream down my face
The candle slowly burns away
As I fade into the dark

I have my whole life ahead of me
I have everything and nothing at the same time
Without you

So empty
So cold
There is nothing left for me
Without you

Copyright © night_child ... [ 2004-01-28 19:58:44]
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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:08:06 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful full of emotion and so truely heartfelt, the poem itself was well written and had a beautiful flow to it

Great write keep it up, head and writings

Luke

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:19:48 PM AEST
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I know it hurts, I do. Hang in there with the rest of us.

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by CountryGirl on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:17:32 PM AEST
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I know everyone says they know how you feel but everyone feels everything differently. I am glad you shared yours with us. You wrote it wonderfully.

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomie on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:02:29 AM AEST
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I can so relate to this one. Pretty much all of my poems on here are about the love that i lost. This is a great write! I really liked it!

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 01:43:08 PM AEST
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I liked this. It was very powerful and I like how it was written. Nice job.

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