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Just wondering why its filled with such strife
Day in and night out we find reasons to cry
When we could just let it all, pass us on by

I opened my soul, to your every last comment
Received only by curse, with no time to lament
I stood and I took each bash and each word
I stood as you laughed at these words that you heard

Met only by few, I found my promised land
Together so tall, standing hand within hand
Each fall we all broke, with our love and our heart
Our thoughts and our words never tearing us apart

So the question I ask, to all that do read
Don’t let the worlds curses, ravish and feed
Open your heart to someone close and so true
The world will seem better to the most and the few

But more than anything, my friends one and all,
It will seem better for you, when you do trip and you fall
Remember my words, for they speak only the truth
So go forth my good friends, and live out your youth

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Friendships

Contributed by forever_lonely on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:13:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I sit here tonight, thinking of life
Just wondering why its filled with such strife
Day in and night out we find reasons to cry
When we could just let it all, pass us on by

I opened my soul, to your every last comment
Received only by curse, with no time to lament
I stood and I took each bash and each word
I stood as you laughed at these words that you heard

Met only by few, I found my promised land
Together so tall, standing hand within hand
Each fall we all broke, with our love and our heart
Our thoughts and our words never tearing us apart

So the question I ask, to all that do read
Don’t let the worlds curses, ravish and feed
Open your heart to someone close and so true
The world will seem better to the most and the few

But more than anything, my friends one and all,
It will seem better for you, when you do trip and you fall
Remember my words, for they speak only the truth
So go forth my good friends, and live out your youth

Copyright Â© forever_lonely ... [ 2004-01-28 19:13:39]
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Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:32:53 PM AEST
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Wow such wisdom. I loved your point. I liked your whole poem. I can say I agree with every word. The world is harsh, life wouldn't be life without it's ups and downs. I hope you're living out your youth by believing in your own words. Good write.

Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by blissfully_fluffi on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:43:54 PM AEST
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this is so true to life.... well done once again

Nettie xxx

Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:59:38 PM AEST
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i sit here across the monitor ...in my heart im grateful your my friend, this poem is beautiful:) *keep writing! hugs n' love nessa

Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:24:51 PM AEST
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You express your thoughts well. You have alot of talent and I like the way you place your thoughts into words. Another nice poem! Kie

Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:41:33 PM AEST
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Great write. True friends always stick by you.

Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:33:35 AM AEST
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aw luke babe thats so sweet. its true though we will always be there foreachother. Thank you. i wanna hug you now. love tam xx

Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:53:26 AM AEST
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Not only do I like what you wrote, but the way you wrote it. The rhymes caught me, and the flow was perfect for this poem.

Of course, what matters most is your thoughts, and I say that you expressed them quite well here. I'm glad you have such friends in your life, and I think that they should see this poem to know how much you care for them.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:01:48 PM AEST
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your words ring true.. very inspiring..
x_x_x

Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:15:39 AM AEST
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I LOVE U LULUS!!! lol this poem is awesome, thanks so much 4 it, i no tammy loves it too. sorry it took a while for me to comment but I havent been on the site cos of poets block as u no! lol. we'll always be here 4 u day or night!!

keep on fighting
never stop writing

John (sparky lmao)

Re: Friendships (User Rating: 1 )
by Maylaur on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 07:48:07 PM AEST
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Very nice poem!

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