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Array ( [sid] => 33025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Letting her go [time] => 2004-01-28 18:23:03 [hometext] => Emotion is a hard thing to put into words. If i did good or bad plz tell me. [bodytext] => Love is always hard on the heart
Most of all when you must part
To lose the one thing you hold dear
Even the strongest will shed a tear

I remember the first time we lay arm and arm
I cradled her softly soft from harm
The world around seemed to stop
On the day on that fields hill top

I remember the first time she saw the sea
She gave me a hug and ran to it in glee
She floated and swam till the sun did set in the sky
I swear she cried as we waved goodbye

Now it’s gone away in the light
I had to cry at such a sight
Sometimes I sleep upon here bed
I still can’t believe my baby is dead
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Shadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Letting her go

Contributed by Shadow on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Love is always hard on the heart
Most of all when you must part
To lose the one thing you hold dear
Even the strongest will shed a tear

I remember the first time we lay arm and arm
I cradled her softly soft from harm
The world around seemed to stop
On the day on that fields hill top

I remember the first time she saw the sea
She gave me a hug and ran to it in glee
She floated and swam till the sun did set in the sky
I swear she cried as we waved goodbye

Now it’s gone away in the light
I had to cry at such a sight
Sometimes I sleep upon here bed
I still can’t believe my baby is dead




Copyright © Shadow ... [ 2004-01-28 18:23:03]
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Re: Letting her go (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:27:59 PM AEST
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That was very good, I am sorry for your loss. hugs and love to you;)


Re: Letting her go (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:39:04 PM AEST
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Oh....
Such a beautiful write. I am so sorry....

I can somewhat sympatize. I just lost my father, but my Father in Heaven is taking care of me... may the LORD wrap His loving arms around you.

God's best I wish you,
Emily


Re: Letting her go (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:39:46 PM AEST
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Yes this poem was Great! I'm sorry for yuor loss, hope you feel better soon.

~Brittany~


Re: Letting her go (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:11:26 PM AEST
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Truely a beautiful write full of everything that makes us human.. emotion.

Im also sorry for your loss, but it will get better, i promise

All the best keep it up, head and writes

Luke


Re: Letting her go (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:16:56 PM AEST
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Oh man what can I say this was good. Truly sad at the end. Was such a nice write with such a tragic ending. Sometimes sleeping on her bed is just something that I can understand you have to do too. Tragic when you lose someone. I can totally sympasize (Spl?) with you. A great write here.


Re: Letting her go (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:43:22 PM AEST
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You did manage to put you thoughts into words very well. Good poem. Sorry for your loss though.




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