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Array ( [sid] => 32988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Tears [time] => 2004-01-28 10:34:32 [hometext] => Really un-confident about my poems so please dont slate it too badly, will accept constructive critiscism, cheers :) [bodytext] => It had not touched me till i was alone,
After leaving your face, leaving the phone.
Just how meaningless is a photograph,
It doesn't cry like you, it doesn't laugh.

The open lens cannot seem to capture,
The sight i see to take me to rapture,
Trapped, for now in a cell of emulsion
it must escape and feed my compulsion.

Fixated on you made me realise,
Theres more to a face than mouth, nose and eyes,
It is no feature, just evident to me,
This wonderous thing by the name of true beauty. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 30 [informant] => shypoet_1986 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )

No Tears

Contributed by shypoet_1986 on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:34:32 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

It had not touched me till i was alone,
After leaving your face, leaving the phone.
Just how meaningless is a photograph,
It doesn't cry like you, it doesn't laugh.

The open lens cannot seem to capture,
The sight i see to take me to rapture,
Trapped, for now in a cell of emulsion
it must escape and feed my compulsion.

Fixated on you made me realise,
Theres more to a face than mouth, nose and eyes,
It is no feature, just evident to me,
This wonderous thing by the name of true beauty.

Copyright © shypoet_1986 ... [ 2004-01-28 10:34:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: No Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by crLepley on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:48:13 AM AEST
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this poem is great. i dot usually like to comment on other peoples work because they are usually better than mine and i am "un-confient" about my writing but yours was too good not to tell you. thanks for the chance to read it.
c.r.

Re: No Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:08:39 AM AEST
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wow, that was cool, I know exactly how you feel, the guy I love is away and I have a picture but its just not the same, good write you can private message me if you ever need someone to talk to, and don't be "un-confidant", your writing is GREAT!

Re: No Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by brandywyne on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:30:03 PM AEST
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all I can say is WOW its good very icely written.

Re: No Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:56:41 AM AEST
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Nicely done I would say. I think it was rather well written.

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