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Array ( [sid] => 32972 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Yes I Could [time] => 2004-01-28 03:34:58 [hometext] => forget this part... [bodytext] => i know you
at least i did at one time
why does it happen?
these puzzles plague me again in my mind
should i call you?
it seems i've moved out of your taste
i can't remember
don't recall the meaning behind your face

i'm here the same
yes i know that things are different
nothing has changed
well i no i could be indifferent

here is the line
i've drawn myself behind a safeguard
what has it done?
there couldn't be anything this hard
do i exit again?
i always have found myself back inside
and as time goes
forget this part it should have died

i'm here as plain
yes i know that things are different
nothing to name
well i no i could be indifferent

as i'm thinking aloud as i'm dreaming to silent
it could be the proud in me making me violent
as i carry this sound as i let go of the feeling
the track record inside me feels so depleting

shove-off...
let go...
run away...
you know...

i'm here so vain
yes i know that things are different
nothing good came
well i no i could...
i could.
yes i could. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 32 [informant] => remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Yes I Could

Contributed by remy on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:34:58 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



i know you
at least i did at one time
why does it happen?
these puzzles plague me again in my mind
should i call you?
it seems i've moved out of your taste
i can't remember
don't recall the meaning behind your face

i'm here the same
yes i know that things are different
nothing has changed
well i no i could be indifferent

here is the line
i've drawn myself behind a safeguard
what has it done?
there couldn't be anything this hard
do i exit again?
i always have found myself back inside
and as time goes
forget this part it should have died

i'm here as plain
yes i know that things are different
nothing to name
well i no i could be indifferent

as i'm thinking aloud as i'm dreaming to silent
it could be the proud in me making me violent
as i carry this sound as i let go of the feeling
the track record inside me feels so depleting

shove-off...
let go...
run away...
you know...

i'm here so vain
yes i know that things are different
nothing good came
well i no i could...
i could.
yes i could.




Copyright © remy ... [ 2004-01-28 03:34:58]
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Re: Yes I Could (User Rating: 1 )
by Rain on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:34:03 AM AEST
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i love this few poems really make me think and yours has.
~blessed be~
rain


Re: Yes I Could (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 05:04:47 PM AEST
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sad but beautifully written.....


Re: Yes I Could (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:49:25 PM AEST
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Interesting... I liked it. It sorta confused me though. I think I got lost in it. Ah well. I stil enjoyed this write. Nicely done.




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