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Array ( [sid] => 32962 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Demon Smiles For Me [time] => 2004-01-28 00:16:53 [hometext] => Arg... [bodytext] => White - sheet
Black - pen
Bleeding - the paper
Bleeding - the PAPER
Touching
Flowing
Forming - the hollows
Shifting
Creating - the Nightmare
on PAPER

Its slowly changing me, from sad to just empty
Those sharp piercing eyes, and the grin that smiles wide
ITS ALL FALLING APART - MY LIFE IS FALLING APART
AND ALL THE PICTURE WANTS - IS TO INFECT MY HEART

Three - years
One - soul
Drawing - the demon
Drawing - the DEMON
Fixate
Compel
Tying - the cerebrum
Finding
Comfort
Embracing - the DEMON

It seems no matter what I do, it all comes back to you
But the demon smiles for me, and allows me to be free
I SHIFT MY OWN WORK - ONTO YOU DEAD, FRAMED EYES
BUT STILL THE DEMON NEEDS - TO CONTORT YOUR LIES
ALL MEMENTOS MUTILATED
ALL LETTERS INCINERATED
ALL PRESENTS DESECRATED
ALL MEMORIES INCARCERATED
AND ALL THOSE PHOTOS - THOSE PRETTY PHOTOS
A PROJECT OF CUT & PASTE - A SENSE OF LOVE AND WASTE
I DRAW YOU
I CUT YOU
I MASK YOU
I HATE YOU

DECAPITATION
You're always smiling

Its all fallen apart - My life has fallen apart
And all you ever wanted - Was to infect my heart
So I shift my own work - Onto your dead, framed eyes
But still the demon will never - Be able to erase your lies

(your lies)
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The Demon Smiles For Me

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:16:53 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

White - sheet
Black - pen
Bleeding - the paper
Bleeding - the PAPER
Touching
Flowing
Forming - the hollows
Shifting
Creating - the Nightmare
on PAPER

Its slowly changing me, from sad to just empty
Those sharp piercing eyes, and the grin that smiles wide
ITS ALL FALLING APART - MY LIFE IS FALLING APART
AND ALL THE PICTURE WANTS - IS TO INFECT MY HEART

Three - years
One - soul
Drawing - the demon
Drawing - the DEMON
Fixate
Compel
Tying - the cerebrum
Finding
Comfort
Embracing - the DEMON

It seems no matter what I do, it all comes back to you
But the demon smiles for me, and allows me to be free
I SHIFT MY OWN WORK - ONTO YOU DEAD, FRAMED EYES
BUT STILL THE DEMON NEEDS - TO CONTORT YOUR LIES
ALL MEMENTOS MUTILATED
ALL LETTERS INCINERATED
ALL PRESENTS DESECRATED
ALL MEMORIES INCARCERATED
AND ALL THOSE PHOTOS - THOSE PRETTY PHOTOS
A PROJECT OF CUT & PASTE - A SENSE OF LOVE AND WASTE
I DRAW YOU
I CUT YOU
I MASK YOU
I HATE YOU

DECAPITATION
You're always smiling

Its all fallen apart - My life has fallen apart
And all you ever wanted - Was to infect my heart
So I shift my own work - Onto your dead, framed eyes
But still the demon will never - Be able to erase your lies

(your lies)

Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2004-01-28 00:16:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Demon Smiles For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by monica109 on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:43:23 AM AEST
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I don't know if this is a bad thing or not but I can relate to the memories being incarcerated! this poem may be a little out there and creeppy but it appeals to my angry, malecious side!

Re: The Demon Smiles For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:47:05 AM AEST
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I agree this one is a lil out there. But I can relate to some of it. I had the some of these same fellings when I spent a year as a member of the department of corrections. My demons seemed to be drawn everyday. Nice write, keep them coming.

MaJ

Re: The Demon Smiles For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:34:47 AM AEST
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*starts shaking in ecstasy* I loved this it was all so mind-blowingly amazing. 'The Demon Smiles For Me' how great is that? This was just in-f*cking-credible. *pumps his hand profusely and asks for his autograph*

Bobo (Joel)

Re: The Demon Smiles For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rain on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:54:50 AM AEST
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darkly beautiful and compelling.
~blessed be~
rain

Re: The Demon Smiles For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:27:55 PM AEST
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Man... You just drew me in on that one and stabbed me repeatedly that was so awesome. I don't really know how to phrase that better but I really liked this write. It was just... Awesome.

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