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Array ( [sid] => 32949 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Need [time] => 2004-01-27 23:12:58 [hometext] => Still waiting for that someone [bodytext] => The people around me make me think,
"How could I be so dumb?
Just get it over with and shoot me now,
so I can just be done.

I don't mean to cause this pain,
and I know you won't forget.
But the pain I feel right now is bad,
I don't think I'll live through it.

I need to not be by myself,
and not be left alone.
I need for you to stnad up for me,
for someone to be bold.

I need to be kept safe from dangers,
that my come my way.
I need for you to be with me,
before I die today. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 36 [informant] => MaRyDoNtUwAnNa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I Need

Contributed by MaRyDoNtUwAnNa on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 11:12:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The people around me make me think,
"How could I be so dumb?
Just get it over with and shoot me now,
so I can just be done.

I don't mean to cause this pain,
and I know you won't forget.
But the pain I feel right now is bad,
I don't think I'll live through it.

I need to not be by myself,
and not be left alone.
I need for you to stnad up for me,
for someone to be bold.

I need to be kept safe from dangers,
that my come my way.
I need for you to be with me,
before I die today.

Copyright © MaRyDoNtUwAnNa ... [ 2004-01-27 23:12:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Need (User Rating: 1 )
by RochelleLloyd on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 11:33:09 PM AEST
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This is a good write... and I just wanted to say I like your name.

Re: I Need (User Rating: 1 )
by Joy on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:17:13 AM AEST
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Very emotional. Can you elaborate on what makes you feel that you will die? You said in the 7th line that you had pain that was bad and you don't think you will live through it. Your poetry is very dark but very readable. I am just curious about such sorrow. JOY

Re: I Need (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:26:01 AM AEST
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simple, painful, honest makes for a good, heart-breaking poem.

Bobo (Joel)

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