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Array ( [sid] => 32904 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life's pain. [time] => 2004-01-27 16:22:31 [hometext] => wrote this some time ago...i''l always remember it was raining out side so i couldn't go out though i wanted to and people were round but i didn't want to be part of it so i hid in my room.only i lived in a bungalow not a flat.the noise was in my head! [bodytext] => there's a great emtpy feeling,
from deep within,
almost like a microscopic monster,
has eaten all under my skin!

there's a pounding that thuds,
far inside my head,
as my brain cells are itching,
as they've gone a burning bright red!

there's a cold frozen feeling,
in my fingers and toes,
icy waters in my veins,
as my veins a water fountain hose!

and i guess the waters,
what's drowning my lungs and heart?
because there isn't any beats,
it feels like they've come apart!

it's cold and wet outside,
so i can't run out there,
but it's full of screeming and noise,
in this flat up here!

so where can i go?
to feed my pain?
or to give it some thing harsh,
to make it go away???

i don't know where to go,
to disappear from the world,
because every where i go,
there's some thing you've hurled! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 21 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Life's pain.

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:22:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



there's a great emtpy feeling,
from deep within,
almost like a microscopic monster,
has eaten all under my skin!

there's a pounding that thuds,
far inside my head,
as my brain cells are itching,
as they've gone a burning bright red!

there's a cold frozen feeling,
in my fingers and toes,
icy waters in my veins,
as my veins a water fountain hose!

and i guess the waters,
what's drowning my lungs and heart?
because there isn't any beats,
it feels like they've come apart!

it's cold and wet outside,
so i can't run out there,
but it's full of screeming and noise,
in this flat up here!

so where can i go?
to feed my pain?
or to give it some thing harsh,
to make it go away???

i don't know where to go,
to disappear from the world,
because every where i go,
there's some thing you've hurled!




Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-01-27 16:22:31]
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Re: Life's pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:52:49 PM AEST
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So sad, pain emanating.....Very well written the imagery is very good. Great write this is one of the best, I've read from you......keep it up!
Anne :D


Re: Life's pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:10:25 PM AEST
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i agree with anne, this really is one of the best that ive read of yours. and i know how you feel too. you have nowhere to hide. i feel the same sometimes....

luv phil xxx




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