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[title] => Why do you want to die?
[time] => 2004-01-27 14:26:33
[hometext] => Wrote this to my friend today after she tried to commit suicide....
[bodytext] => How could you think of dying?,
When all I have is you?,
Why have you given up trying?
You’re a special person, you know it’s true!
We shared all ups and downs,
In times of happiness and sadness,
Even got drunk together, acting like clowns!
Why do you insist with this madness?
Life isn’t an easy trip neither a piece of cake,
But whatever happened we always found a helping hand,
C’mon don’t kill yourself, our future is at the stake!,
Life with you is beautiful; don’t bring it to an end
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Why do you want to die?
Contributed by
Necromant
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:26:33 PM in AEST
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How could you think of dying?,
When all I have is you?,
Why have you given up trying?
You’re a special person, you know it’s true!
We shared all ups and downs,
In times of happiness and sadness,
Even got drunk together, acting like clowns!
Why do you insist with this madness?
Life isn’t an easy trip neither a piece of cake,
But whatever happened we always found a helping hand,
C’mon don’t kill yourself, our future is at the stake!,
Life with you is beautiful; don’t bring it to an end
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Necromant
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2004-01-27 14:26:33]
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by Night_Child on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:28:26 PM AEST
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| Heh...I wish I had a friend like you after all those times I did and still do try to commit suicide. They're a very lucky person. Very good write! |
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by AbstractMinded on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:29:18 PM AEST
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Thats some heavy stuff. Well written with nicely conveyed emotions.
Good job |
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:13:25 PM AEST
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| this one really left me without words |
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:01:24 PM AEST
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I'm speechless too. Good poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by forever_lonely on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:50:44 PM AEST
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hey anne
great poem its great to see someone speaking the other side of suicide or just people wanting to die, some of us forget that were not the only one that are effected when we think of death
really great anne amazing
Luke |
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:30:18 AM AEST
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I find it sad that a person can do this to themself and fail to realize that so many love them and that they would be greatly missed.Unfortunately when you want death,I think your soul,mind and heart only dwell in one place:sadness.Your friend is very lucky to have someone so loving as you,maybe she wouldn't be there today if it weren't for you.I just hope she realizes how loved she is and how truly lucky she is as well to have someone so caring as you.Not everyone can say they do.
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:32:11 AM AEST
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If there were more people like you, then perhaps there'd be a lot less suicide. Very touching poem, i'm sure your friend will think so, too.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 09:11:00 AM AEST
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this is a sad story but the writing is great, very touching, indeed!
I'm sure it will be cherished and definently pray that she realizes that she's wanted-n-needed.
This masterpeice will help so many people.
well done!
hugg, luv,
emy |
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by jeanie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 09:30:29 AM AEST
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I liked this alot :D
real friends don't really leave you..and the others..let's hope they read on time.
I'm almost sure that if everyone who has ever even thought of suicide would realize how many ppl would be hurt and miss him/her, then nobody could have guts to kill self.
jeanie |
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Re: Why do you want to die?
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:49:47 PM AEST
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Oh, wow . . . 'pologies for the redundancy, but this is seriously touching. And sweet. And inspirational. And-- yeah, I'll shut up now :).
--Nora |
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