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Array ( [sid] => 32856 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Murder i wrote! [time] => 2004-01-27 07:26:24 [hometext] => Not about me(someone suggested on my comments of other poems i should write about run ins with the police) so that's what i'm doing! [bodytext] => i'm siting in a cell,
in the police world of hell,
me and them,
ain't getting on well,
and this place really smells!
I don't take your food,
and i keep being rude,
and i'm swearing back to,
coz i'm in this frame of mood!

take me out of this room,
stick me in another one,
record what i'm saying,
but i ain't got the guts,
i ain't about to say,
what happened the other day...

in my head i'm,
iggnoring,
everything your saying!
in my mouth i'm rehearsing,
"no comment, no comment",
you begin to be cursing,
and get angry again,
you start to be threatening,
until your colleague pulls you away!
soo i laugh in your face,
say "you shouldn't be a copper, you being at your MENTAL AGE".

then you go and hit me,
so before it happens i shout "BRING I ON!"
the constable walks in,
and goes "what the F***S going on?"
and that's it, the damage is done!

interview's terminated,
push me back inside my room,
i'm siting in there with a temper,
and my blacks eyes purply blue!

one tight nosed looking g*t,
says he's come to pay respects,
but asked me not to press charges,
says my case,
will fall apart.

i turn round and look him in the eye,
he sees my "BLACK EYE",
but he don't look at all suprised,
so i bring on a raw,
only resloving in me being,
restrained on the ground,
my head being cracked down,
and my blood to be around...

dreaming about this,
makes me stir some more,
I WAKE UP QUICK!
but it's just another dream...
another nightmare,
here...
to make my head SORE!
to scare me some MORE!!

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 34 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Murder i wrote!

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:26:24 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



i'm siting in a cell,
in the police world of hell,
me and them,
ain't getting on well,
and this place really smells!
I don't take your food,
and i keep being rude,
and i'm swearing back to,
coz i'm in this frame of mood!

take me out of this room,
stick me in another one,
record what i'm saying,
but i ain't got the guts,
i ain't about to say,
what happened the other day...

in my head i'm,
iggnoring,
everything your saying!
in my mouth i'm rehearsing,
"no comment, no comment",
you begin to be cursing,
and get angry again,
you start to be threatening,
until your colleague pulls you away!
soo i laugh in your face,
say "you shouldn't be a copper, you being at your MENTAL AGE".

then you go and hit me,
so before it happens i shout "BRING I ON!"
the constable walks in,
and goes "what the F***S going on?"
and that's it, the damage is done!

interview's terminated,
push me back inside my room,
i'm siting in there with a temper,
and my blacks eyes purply blue!

one tight nosed looking g*t,
says he's come to pay respects,
but asked me not to press charges,
says my case,
will fall apart.

i turn round and look him in the eye,
he sees my "BLACK EYE",
but he don't look at all suprised,
so i bring on a raw,
only resloving in me being,
restrained on the ground,
my head being cracked down,
and my blood to be around...

dreaming about this,
makes me stir some more,
I WAKE UP QUICK!
but it's just another dream...
another nightmare,
here...
to make my head SORE!
to scare me some MORE!!





Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-01-27 07:26:24]
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Re: Murder i wrote! (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:41:59 AM AEST
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Hmm original poem! I kinda liked it, thank mercy it was only a dream heh! Great write!
Anne :D




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