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Sept 13, 03

When u look at me what do u see

What do u think I should be or ought be or do u even notice me at all maybe if my waist were slimmer would u notice me then if my face resembled what u see on tv would I be beautiful to u then If I care how good I look, to be so shallow and self-involved so u can be pleased.

Who are u to tell me how beautiful I'm supposed to be

Do u judge my full round body my very curving hips, my narrow eyes, my too small nose, my small funny lips, my unsexy voice, and my big feet

What do u see
When u look at me what do u see

Do u see my big and round face

Do u even see my heart that big as the mississippi river or how bright my spirit is or my soulfulness

Or my willingness to love that is big as the universe.
Do u even see me
Do u want to see me
Do I turn u off that badly
What do u see, tell me

Be my mirrior why can't I be the pretty all of them all
Why can't I be beautiful to you
Do you even want to see me at all

What do u see, When u see me

Remy Maskantinio

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What do U See

Contributed by remi on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:44:41 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



What do u see


Sept 13, 03

When u look at me what do u see

What do u think I should be or ought be or do u even notice me at all maybe if my waist were slimmer would u notice me then if my face resembled what u see on tv would I be beautiful to u then If I care how good I look, to be so shallow and self-involved so u can be pleased.

Who are u to tell me how beautiful I'm supposed to be

Do u judge my full round body my very curving hips, my narrow eyes, my too small nose, my small funny lips, my unsexy voice, and my big feet

What do u see
When u look at me what do u see

Do u see my big and round face

Do u even see my heart that big as the mississippi river or how bright my spirit is or my soulfulness

Or my willingness to love that is big as the universe.
Do u even see me
Do u want to see me
Do I turn u off that badly
What do u see, tell me

Be my mirrior why can't I be the pretty all of them all
Why can't I be beautiful to you
Do you even want to see me at all

What do u see, When u see me

Remy Maskantinio





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Re: What do U See (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:55:18 AM AEST
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man..that was tight..i love it..I have an answer to your question.."into your eyes"..nice work..i love it..Represent


Re: What do U See (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 11:26:38 PM AEST
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NIce write. I've noticed people look right through each other just about no matter what. No one really sees the inner person. They just don't. Almost a crying shame sometimes. I think some people who get lots of attention would be avoided if it was seen.




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