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The hours seem like days
The days like years

I still sense your arms around me
I look up half excepting to see you smiling down at me
But your not so I hold my self and remember

Your voice still gently whispers in my ear
Your aroma is still in my clothes
Slowly all of this is fading into nothingness

I need to feel your embrace
I want to feel your tough
I love you so much and miss you almost as much

Before long we will be together
Soon we can touch and cuddle together once more
I can’t wait till we are together again

So I watch the minutes go by like hours
The hours like days and the days like years
I wait for the day that I can see you again
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Minutes like Hours

Contributed by lil_angel on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:30:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The minutes click by, it seems like hours
The hours seem like days
The days like years

I still sense your arms around me
I look up half excepting to see you smiling down at me
But your not so I hold my self and remember

Your voice still gently whispers in my ear
Your aroma is still in my clothes
Slowly all of this is fading into nothingness

I need to feel your embrace
I want to feel your tough
I love you so much and miss you almost as much

Before long we will be together
Soon we can touch and cuddle together once more
I can’t wait till we are together again

So I watch the minutes go by like hours
The hours like days and the days like years
I wait for the day that I can see you again

Copyright Â© lil_angel ... [ 2004-01-27 01:30:15]
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Re: Minutes like Hours (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:59:56 PM AEST
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It's beautiful... don't you dare change a thing.

Re: Minutes like Hours (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:31:58 PM AEST
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i feel the pain..i can't see my bf for awhile either.........stay strong though and good write!
luv always

Re: Minutes like Hours (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:44:23 PM AEST
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Hey Lil_Angel I liked the poem. The last line and the first line of the second last paragraph though gives me a sense that he is dead for some reason. But all in all a nice heartfelt write. I'm sure he will like it just the way it is.

Re: Minutes like Hours (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 02:25:16 AM AEST
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NOW THAT SOUNDS VERY HEART FELT,LUCKY GUY!NICE POEM!!
DAN!!!

Re: Minutes like Hours (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 01:18:09 PM AEST
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Nice work.I hope you are getting those cuddles now and lots of them.
It is nice to love and be loved back

steve

Re: Minutes like Hours (User Rating: 1 )
by Khosrow on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 04:39:35 PM AEST
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I liked again the choosing of wording and the ambience displayed or should I say, radiated by this poem.

Excellent job!

Re: Minutes like Hours (User Rating: 1 )
by b_rand on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:15:21 AM AEST
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well im new here ... so i see all these people writing "wow i really felt that one" abuot all these poems and honestly i didnt feel anything about any of them until I came across this one ... I also got the idea that whoever your talking of is dead ... but this one ... this is definitely an emotion arouser. great job

Re: Minutes like Hours (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 11:16:46 PM AEST
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Nice I liked this one. It was very powerful to me.

Re: Minutes like Hours (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:30:20 PM AEST
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I hope you get your wish. *S* Cynthia

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