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Array ( [sid] => 32805 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rainbow Thoughts [time] => 2004-01-26 17:32:33 [hometext] => I look at this and am wondering if I actually wrote it. I just started typing suddenly and this was formed. A happy poem, strangely enough-- how I feel when I am. [bodytext] => silver-sweet the stars above
golden glimmers, whispered love
velvet darkness, black as coal
silver-gold is in my soul

gentle green the dewy lawn
amber in the nearing dawn
vibrant blue the churning sea
all are faded next to me

rainbow murmurs twist and twine
thinking thoughts that make me shine
all the colors in the skies
now must dwell within my eyes. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 306 [topic] => 54 [informant] => ShadowDaughter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

Rainbow Thoughts

Contributed by ShadowDaughter on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:32:33 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

silver-sweet the stars above
golden glimmers, whispered love
velvet darkness, black as coal
silver-gold is in my soul

gentle green the dewy lawn
amber in the nearing dawn
vibrant blue the churning sea
all are faded next to me

rainbow murmurs twist and twine
thinking thoughts that make me shine
all the colors in the skies
now must dwell within my eyes.

Copyright © ShadowDaughter ... [ 2004-01-26 17:32:33]
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:50:58 PM AEST
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WoW Yay! Finaly a happy poem!! Loved it!!
Anne :D:D

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:00:42 PM AEST
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Words fail me.....
I have to tell you that this is now my favorite by you.
You shine when you write happy poems.
The flow, the rhyme, everything is in synch.
I commend you because you've out done yourself on this one. May you carry on! Kie

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:05:38 PM AEST
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pretty!!
michelle

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by limpingunicorn on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:33:21 PM AEST
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Yep - this is excellent.
The way you use the visual impact of colours is impressive, particularly when you use them to lead up to and underline your "radiance":
"all are faded next to me".
There is a genuine talent here.

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 08:29:17 PM AEST
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Must be something in the air today. :) This was a very pleasant read... calming. Well done!

~ Moonlit

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 06:15:10 AM AEST
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Awww, Nora, I had no idea! I really like this one a lot, shows a side to your poetry that is beautiful, but neglected. Brought a smile to my face.

Truly,
-Dan

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:42:16 PM AEST
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so sweetly inspiring, im so happy you shared this, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:46:40 PM AEST
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surely this must be the epitome of true beauty.. amazing poem..
x_x_x

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:49:43 PM AEST
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WOW!!!! This is a great write. I loved it!!!!!!!! It's amazing how something hits us at the spir of the moment. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:15:58 PM AEST
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Well worked. Its short, but captures what it needs to.

Enjoyable read.

Re: Rainbow Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:49:46 PM AEST
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Awesome, very nice.

Spazzo

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