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Array ( [sid] => 32797 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Story Of A Girl [time] => 2004-01-26 16:35:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Look at the girl, she lay empty on the floor
Let me tell you a story, just wait for whats in store
A tale of heartaches, friendships, and pain
After all shes gone through, on the floor her body is lain
Into a cruel and hateful world, a girl is born
A life of joy and happiness for her little girl, her mother has sworn
But the thing her mother did not know
Was that the world could stoop so low
The girls life started out with laughs and smiles
But one day turned to pain and emotional trials
Back-stabbing friends turned her cold to the world
Thoughts of death and suicide in her head swirled
Guys would use her then like a rag-dolll toss her to the side
She finally realized that the boys used her and lied
After years of feeling only pain, she finally became numb
Felt worthless, felt like she was scum
One night the girl wished to feel
So she found a pack of razorblades and broke the seal
Took a deep breath and pushed the razor against her skin
Dragged the blade to see what was truely within
The rush of life surged through her veins
Blood poured off her arm like teardrops when it rains
SHe contunued on with the escape from life
For many years to get away from her strife
Then the dreadful night, she took out her one true friend
Not knowing that tonight would be the very end
She pressed a little to hard this time
And made one to many a line
The blood was flowing more then it ever had
But oddly enough she was not sad
She slowly slipped into an unconcious state
She finally escaped the world filled with hate
The last drops of blood feel unto the ground
Along with it her heart beat one finaly pound
Look at her face, she died with a smile [comments] => 4 [counter] => 297 [topic] => 36 [informant] => aprillie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Story Of A Girl

Contributed by aprillie on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:35:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Look at the girl, she lay empty on the floor
Let me tell you a story, just wait for whats in store
A tale of heartaches, friendships, and pain
After all shes gone through, on the floor her body is lain
Into a cruel and hateful world, a girl is born
A life of joy and happiness for her little girl, her mother has sworn
But the thing her mother did not know
Was that the world could stoop so low
The girls life started out with laughs and smiles
But one day turned to pain and emotional trials
Back-stabbing friends turned her cold to the world
Thoughts of death and suicide in her head swirled
Guys would use her then like a rag-dolll toss her to the side
She finally realized that the boys used her and lied
After years of feeling only pain, she finally became numb
Felt worthless, felt like she was scum
One night the girl wished to feel
So she found a pack of razorblades and broke the seal
Took a deep breath and pushed the razor against her skin
Dragged the blade to see what was truely within
The rush of life surged through her veins
Blood poured off her arm like teardrops when it rains
SHe contunued on with the escape from life
For many years to get away from her strife
Then the dreadful night, she took out her one true friend
Not knowing that tonight would be the very end
She pressed a little to hard this time
And made one to many a line
The blood was flowing more then it ever had
But oddly enough she was not sad
She slowly slipped into an unconcious state
She finally escaped the world filled with hate
The last drops of blood feel unto the ground
Along with it her heart beat one finaly pound
Look at her face, she died with a smile




Copyright © aprillie ... [ 2004-01-26 16:35:39]
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Re: Story Of A Girl (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:38:53 PM AEST
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AWESOME AWESOME WRITE!! I applaude this peice. Very good!


Re: Story Of A Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by pain_and_tears on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:04:13 PM AEST
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Deep.


Re: Story Of A Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by MaRyDoNtUwAnNa on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:58:46 AM AEST
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Wow no words for this piece of poetry i give you probs
~*Amanda


Re: Story Of A Girl (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:35:54 PM AEST
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i love it... your a very smart person.





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