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Array ( [sid] => 32786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ...Act2 [time] => 2004-01-26 15:31:19 [hometext] => still not sure about this new style try and guess what these are about... [bodytext] => a thief wiht honor
a girl with a perfect life
he'll steal her heart
but she'd give it away
on the outside
but there's allways a twist
a sadistic father with sceletons in the closet
the golden boy
a pompus shovenist
how he wronged her
she may never tell
they all play a part
love can shatter the screen
and just like the movies
hapiness,pain,joy,and torment all around
but no comercials
this all seems like some great work
this is all true life
not enough bad diolouge
for the silver screen [comments] => 4 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 48 [informant] => TaintedOptomist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

...Act2

Contributed by TaintedOptomist on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:31:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

a thief wiht honor
a girl with a perfect life
he'll steal her heart
but she'd give it away
on the outside
but there's allways a twist
a sadistic father with sceletons in the closet
the golden boy
a pompus shovenist
how he wronged her
she may never tell
they all play a part
love can shatter the screen
and just like the movies
hapiness,pain,joy,and torment all around
but no comercials
this all seems like some great work
this is all true life
not enough bad diolouge
for the silver screen

Copyright © TaintedOptomist ... [ 2004-01-26 15:31:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ...Act2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:44:41 PM AEST
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Oh I was right! THis poem is awsome! My my what a tragic story! this all seems like some great work very thoughtul poem!
'this is all true life
not enough bad diolouge
for the silver screen'
....Amazing! Great write!
Anne :D

Re: ...Act2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 06:30:56 AM AEST
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my Interpretation of this poem may not be correct, but it fits so well with my circumstances months ago, it made my heart jump into my throat reading this...

Re: ...Act2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:27:14 AM AEST
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Hey its me again, decided to read this one 2 times : ) i havnt heard from you in a while, are you ok?

Re: ...Act2 (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:27:53 PM AEST
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wow this is so cool. This new style is equally as good as your old one. Maybe now you can kinda pick and choose and write fromt eh style which suits the subject matter best?
xxxxx

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