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sophisticated
like an old black and white movie
dazled the croud
with a single smile
her romeo entered the room
and the love story was set
they laughed and danced
under the pale moonlight
after candle light dinners

but thier laughter turned
to screams
as they always do bad went to worse
this love story
turned to something from
the mind of poe
no rages to riches
no knight in shining armor
just a boy and a girl [comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 48 [informant] => TaintedOptomist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

...And Just Like The Movies (We all Play our...)(Part1)

Contributed by TaintedOptomist on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:22:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

she graced the stage
sophisticated
like an old black and white movie
dazled the croud
with a single smile
her romeo entered the room
and the love story was set
they laughed and danced
under the pale moonlight
after candle light dinners

but thier laughter turned
to screams
as they always do bad went to worse
this love story
turned to something from
the mind of poe
no rages to riches
no knight in shining armor
just a boy and a girl

Copyright © TaintedOptomist ... [ 2004-01-26 15:22:56]
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Re: ...And Just Like The Movies (We all Play our...)(Part1) (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:40:51 PM AEST
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Hmm interesting poem! Good writing, I loved it! Going to read the next one!!
Anne :D

Re: ...And Just Like The Movies (We all Play our...)(Part1) (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 06:25:32 AM AEST
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this is different, it seemed to make sense to me alot, im not sure whether i can relate, but it feels that way...

Re: ...And Just Like The Movies (We all Play our...)(Part1) (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:11:25 PM AEST
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You write well. I like this, it is better than your later stuff. I guess this site got to you in the end. it doesn't have to stay that way though. don't try to write what people want or play games with them. write what you feel and the words will come.

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