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Array ( [sid] => 32773 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Breakup [time] => 2004-01-26 13:35:02 [hometext] => typical goodbye [bodytext] => Were the stars shining that lonely night,
when I watched you walk away?
Was the wind even blowing on that night,
when I didn't know what to say?
Does the knife still hurt,
when you twist it deep inside?
Does the pain of your words still hurt,
when you slashed away my pride?
And if you were to go today,
could I help but cry?
And if you were to leave today,
where would your love reside?
I couldn't have been alive that day,
not after what you said.
'Cause if I was alive that day,
I wouldn't have left our bed.
And if it were to rain tonight,
I think I'd be all right,
cause if it were to rain tonight,
you wouldn't say goodbye. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 322 [topic] => 52 [informant] => CodyJ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Breakup

Contributed by CodyJ on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:35:02 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Were the stars shining that lonely night,
when I watched you walk away?
Was the wind even blowing on that night,
when I didn't know what to say?
Does the knife still hurt,
when you twist it deep inside?
Does the pain of your words still hurt,
when you slashed away my pride?
And if you were to go today,
could I help but cry?
And if you were to leave today,
where would your love reside?
I couldn't have been alive that day,
not after what you said.
'Cause if I was alive that day,
I wouldn't have left our bed.
And if it were to rain tonight,
I think I'd be all right,
cause if it were to rain tonight,
you wouldn't say goodbye.

Copyright © CodyJ ... [ 2004-01-26 13:35:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:07:38 PM AEST
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very good poem..I enjoyed reading it...Keep it up.....Jamie

Re: Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:24:41 PM AEST
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Oh i know what you mean. This poem is very touching. Goodbyes are usually devastating. Hope you're better now :)
Anne :D

Re: Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:51:14 PM AEST
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Your poem was nothing less than incredible. The flow, your words were not only in harmony but so touching to read. A great write this one is.

Re: Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:06:49 PM AEST
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Intereting write. Rather good though. I enjoyed reading this. Very sad though.

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