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Mad man's mantra makes'm madder,
Giving go, gave going grievance,
Defective decisions dated deliverance,

Head Hotspur, heating hotter,
Love lost, loved lived, love later,
Poor performances pushes patience,
Early efforts evade every essence,

Head Hotspur, heating hotter
Taking todays tampered temper,
Failing freedom, forgetting faith,
Weilding weapons, warrant wraith,

Head Hotspur, heating hotter,
Severe seperation, soon slaughter,
never noticed, now namely,
Kill killing, killjoy kindly,

Head Hostpur, heaven high,
Lavish Life lost, lonely living lie,
Parading peace proves prudence,
Eternal eternity eases existance, [comments] => 6 [counter] => 263 [topic] => 25 [informant] => spiffyphil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Head Hotspur

Contributed by spiffyphil on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:02:06 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Head Hotspur, heating hotter,
Mad man's mantra makes'm madder,
Giving go, gave going grievance,
Defective decisions dated deliverance,

Head Hotspur, heating hotter,
Love lost, loved lived, love later,
Poor performances pushes patience,
Early efforts evade every essence,

Head Hotspur, heating hotter
Taking todays tampered temper,
Failing freedom, forgetting faith,
Weilding weapons, warrant wraith,

Head Hotspur, heating hotter,
Severe seperation, soon slaughter,
never noticed, now namely,
Kill killing, killjoy kindly,

Head Hostpur, heaven high,
Lavish Life lost, lonely living lie,
Parading peace proves prudence,
Eternal eternity eases existance,

Copyright © spiffyphil ... [ 2004-01-26 02:02:06]
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Re: Head Hotspur (User Rating: 1 )
by spiffyphil on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:04:33 AM AEST
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This poem is about a hotspur's eternal struggle with one's self. Specifily a legend of a man who couldn't deal with himself or anyone around him, and ended up killing his coworkers and himself, true story.

Re: Head Hotspur (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:17:45 AM AEST
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Well im glad you explained it, as i would of never figured it out. It was interesting to read though.

Re: Head Hotspur (User Rating: 1 )
by Exodus-On-Life on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:19:51 AM AEST
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I loved it and I wish for the life of me that I could develop a poem like that...

Re: Head Hotspur (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:02:46 AM AEST
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hey there,
Sad but good.
Keep up the good work u hottie.
Thought that would give u a laugh.
huggs, luv,
emy

Re: Head Hotspur (User Rating: 1 )
by spiffyphil on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 10:11:52 AM AEST
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Mercedes, yeah I really struggled to make this style of poem work, but in the end I think its effective.

Re: Head Hotspur (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:40:50 AM AEST
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Glad to read the explanation :p the poem is great! Very sad story and to know it was true gave me creeps heh!
Anne :D

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