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Array ( [sid] => 32700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I've never felt so alone before [time] => 2004-01-25 21:08:10 [hometext] => I've been asked how i feel in my soul. well...... this is it [bodytext] => Hope is lost to some
We march along to the drum
Darkness is our only friend
Our broken heart times doesn’t mend
Hope is but a happy thought
No matter how much we fought
We lost it all on this day
In the darkness in silence we lay
Alive or dead I have shame
I’m the only one I blame
And if this solemn night I die
I swear to you best not cry
I wasted my years all away
For my soul do not pray
However the price is set
I will pay my heavy debt
I pray to good you remember this day
Don’t cast into the abyss astray
Shackle my soul if I should die
I know I’m not bound for the sky
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I've never felt so alone before

Contributed by Shadow on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 09:08:10 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Hope is lost to some
We march along to the drum
Darkness is our only friend
Our broken heart times doesn’t mend
Hope is but a happy thought
No matter how much we fought
We lost it all on this day
In the darkness in silence we lay
Alive or dead I have shame
I’m the only one I blame
And if this solemn night I die
I swear to you best not cry
I wasted my years all away
For my soul do not pray
However the price is set
I will pay my heavy debt
I pray to good you remember this day
Don’t cast into the abyss astray
Shackle my soul if I should die
I know I’m not bound for the sky

Copyright Â© Shadow ... [ 2004-01-25 21:08:10]
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Re: I've never felt so alone before (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:41:55 AM AEST
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I've felt this way so many times. Hope you get through it. Great work here.

Re: I've never felt so alone before (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:42:06 AM AEST
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I'm sorry to hear Shadow that you have no hope
For hope is what keeps our soul living and vibrant and able to cope!
This was a beautifully written poem.....because it was meant to be sad and lamenting......but I certainly hope you are not meaning for it to have this ending!
Please hang on.....tomorrow is another day
I pray some goodness will come your way
Warm hugs
ConSue

Re: I've never felt so alone before (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:22:45 AM AEST
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this brought a tear to my eyes Im sorry that your feeling this way. Hold on the sun will come to shine on you soon.
michelle

Re: I've never felt so alone before (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:59:42 AM AEST
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SPEAK IF NOT SPOKEN, BRING IF NOT BRUNG, REACH IF YOU'VE FELT BROKEN, TO SING IF NOT SUNG, HOLD UNTIL HELD, BREAK UNTIL BROKE, UNFOLD IT TILL YOU'VE FELT, LIKE LIFE IS NO LONGER A JOKE! meaning..... LIFE IS PRETTY BORING WITHOUT LAUGHTER,& EVEN HARDER TO LIVE, HAPPILY EVER AFTER! GOOD POEM TOO! DAN.

Re: I've never felt so alone before (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:02:41 PM AEST
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Powerful words! Very sad poem! Hope you're better now.
Anne :D

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