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Array ( [sid] => 32690 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cut A Little Deeper [time] => 2004-01-25 19:05:56 [hometext] => Well, after 3 rewrites I think (hope) I've managed to turned a horrid scrawl written in a fit of anger into something decent. A big thank you to Ladyfawn for her help on this piece! [bodytext] => Why do you always slam the door
Shut me out and turn me away
My heart on the floor
All I want is for you to be there
To give a little
Care a little
Why do you leave me here in tears
After I've loved you all these years
Wanting to die
I breathe a little sigh

Every little thing you say
Every time you throw it away
Kills me from inside
Every time you yell at me
Every stupid name you call me
Cuts me a little deeper
(I cut a little deeper)

I only wanted you to take it away
Why won't you make it go away?
I can't live with you being this way
I'll kill myself if it'll make you see
'Cause nothing else can make you be
The person I thought you would be

So when you open up the door
I'll be drowning in my own blood
'Cause I needed more
You'll finally know you took too long
That it's too late
I've sealed my fate
'Cause every time you ignored me
I wondered if you really loved me
I died for you
Now I'm dead to you

Every little thing you do
Every time if only you knew
Eats me up inside
Every time you lose control
Every piece of my heart you stole
Cuts me that much deeper
(I cut a little deeper)

I only asked you to take it away
Why can't you make it go away?
I can't keep living feeling this way
What must I do to make you see
There's no other way I can be
I'm nobody else but me

So I'm alone in the rain
Alone in all this pain
With only you to blame
Why do you always do
The last thing you should do
Why do you leave me dying?
(As I cut a little deeper) [comments] => 10 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Cut A Little Deeper

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:05:56 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Why do you always slam the door
Shut me out and turn me away
My heart on the floor
All I want is for you to be there
To give a little
Care a little
Why do you leave me here in tears
After I've loved you all these years
Wanting to die
I breathe a little sigh

Every little thing you say
Every time you throw it away
Kills me from inside
Every time you yell at me
Every stupid name you call me
Cuts me a little deeper
(I cut a little deeper)

I only wanted you to take it away
Why won't you make it go away?
I can't live with you being this way
I'll kill myself if it'll make you see
'Cause nothing else can make you be
The person I thought you would be

So when you open up the door
I'll be drowning in my own blood
'Cause I needed more
You'll finally know you took too long
That it's too late
I've sealed my fate
'Cause every time you ignored me
I wondered if you really loved me
I died for you
Now I'm dead to you

Every little thing you do
Every time if only you knew
Eats me up inside
Every time you lose control
Every piece of my heart you stole
Cuts me that much deeper
(I cut a little deeper)

I only asked you to take it away
Why can't you make it go away?
I can't keep living feeling this way
What must I do to make you see
There's no other way I can be
I'm nobody else but me

So I'm alone in the rain
Alone in all this pain
With only you to blame
Why do you always do
The last thing you should do
Why do you leave me dying?
(As I cut a little deeper)

Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2004-01-25 19:05:56]
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Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:16:29 PM AEST
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was not a horrid scrawl my dear, when all you wish is that he'd hear... hugs and big love, nessa
~am always here for you:)

Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:16:33 PM AEST
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That is a very good write about something very sad....i've been through so much in my life and never did that...and I'm only 15...but I wouldn't ever do that...Because I take life as it comes...if my fate is supposed to end...it will when it's ready...I loved your poem though...
JAMIE

Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 09:15:31 PM AEST
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sweet stuff that there! i luved it. u should make it a song, like music and all, that'd awesome!

Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 11:02:24 PM AEST
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Such a touchibg write with so much feeling into this! I enjoyed this read! Christina

Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by CuttersAngel on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:20:44 AM AEST
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If you could find the right type of music you could actually put this into a song and it would sound so unbelievably incredible!!! Maybe if you sent it to one of your favorite bands and had them take a look at it, that could actually happen.. i think you seriously need to look into somehow making this a song.. Best of luck!!

Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:57:25 AM AEST
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your emotions flow through this entire master piece! I wish that I could light a candle in his head to help him see what a very special woman he has in you!
michelle

Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:47:11 PM AEST
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Oh so much anger and pain! Amazingly written poem! Hope you're better!
Anne :D

Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:12:08 PM AEST
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Angry, sad, lonely, and painful at the same time. Amazingly well written.

Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by pain_and_tears on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:12:00 PM AEST
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that was soo good! It sounds like a song to me....deep and touching. Very powerful.

Re: Cut A Little Deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:37:08 AM AEST
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This has been one of the better I've read all week and trust me that is saying alot. This was an awesome write Moonlit. It was composed beyond perfection. It spoke volumes and volumes in this ammount. I can understand it perfectly I think. Just totally awesome. No words I speak will do this one justice.

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