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die die suicide were turning on you
die die suicide were all sick and its the truth
die die suicide that’s what we have to say
die die suicide your just some stupid way

because you destroy families you destroy homes
you mess with peoples minds and wont leave them alone
you sneak into their minds and you plant a chip
to take that razor blade and to call it quiets
does it matter to you what happens after that??
do you stare at a body were a life once sat
we’ve all thought about it once or twice
about calling in and taken are lives

but still I would never give you reign
to kill myself and call you king
I rather have my brain be torn from my head
than pronoce that blood my new bed

die die suicide y don’t YOU call it quiets
die die suicide take a razor blade and call that it
WOULD YOUR FAMILY BE SHATTERED TORN INSIDE??
WOULD YOUR FREINDS BE BROKEN BLAME IT ON BEING HIGH???
BUT NO YOU WOULD NEVER KNOW HOW THAT FEALS!!!!
BECAUSE YOUR NOT ANYTHING...BUT YOUR something....and i wish that you weren’t real
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DIE DIE SUICIDE

Contributed by jkpunk13 on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:53:19 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

die die suicide were turning on you
die die suicide were all sick and its the truth
die die suicide that’s what we have to say
die die suicide your just some stupid way

because you destroy families you destroy homes
you mess with peoples minds and wont leave them alone
you sneak into their minds and you plant a chip
to take that razor blade and to call it quiets
does it matter to you what happens after that??
do you stare at a body were a life once sat
we’ve all thought about it once or twice
about calling in and taken are lives

but still I would never give you reign
to kill myself and call you king
I rather have my brain be torn from my head
than pronoce that blood my new bed

die die suicide y don’t YOU call it quiets
die die suicide take a razor blade and call that it
WOULD YOUR FAMILY BE SHATTERED TORN INSIDE??
WOULD YOUR FREINDS BE BROKEN BLAME IT ON BEING HIGH???
BUT NO YOU WOULD NEVER KNOW HOW THAT FEALS!!!!
BECAUSE YOUR NOT ANYTHING...BUT YOUR something....and i wish that you weren’t real

Copyright Â© jkpunk13 ... [ 2004-01-25 18:53:19]
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Re: DIE DIE SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:03:32 PM AEST
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so deep and sad..I could never think of doing that.......AHHHHHHHHHH..........Good poem though...
Keep writing..
JAMIE

Re: DIE DIE SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:54:50 PM AEST
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powerful. Your writing style is frightninly direct. Gives me a lot to think about as well. awesome!

Re: DIE DIE SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by bgeorge_275 on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:26:50 PM AEST
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WOW! This poem really made me think about my life and think about why I've wanted to commit suicide. Its an awesome poem and I love your style.

Re: DIE DIE SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:30:38 AM AEST
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Wow this was filled with power. Yes! Never give in to the dying of the light. I think this was relatively well written. I enjoyed reading it.

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