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Rainbows fall down with your smile

Brainstorming for something
Songs we will listen to for quite a while

The energy is flowing, sound so wonderfully
Fear subsides into the shadows of fade

Dreaming for unknown reasons
Our smile ventures to the shallows as we wade

Oh, beautiful heavenly angel of
You make me shade myself so naturally

The colors of your sun ring
And the warmth of your smile instantly

Flying through the crystal waves
Seeing clearly throughout this world

Falling even faster
Brainstorms of sunsets, twisting into the whirl

Love is so blind, and fading into me

Windows so frozen, the rain has to be

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Shades Display Instantly

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:48:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Flowing everywhere, color instantly
Rainbows fall down with your smile

Brainstorming for something
Songs we will listen to for quite a while

The energy is flowing, sound so wonderfully
Fear subsides into the shadows of fade

Dreaming for unknown reasons
Our smile ventures to the shallows as we wade

Oh, beautiful heavenly angel of
You make me shade myself so naturally

The colors of your sun ring
And the warmth of your smile instantly

Flying through the crystal waves
Seeing clearly throughout this world

Falling even faster
Brainstorms of sunsets, twisting into the whirl

Love is so blind, and fading into me

Windows so frozen, the rain has to be

Beautiful

Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2004-01-25 15:48:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Shades Display Instantly (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:53:43 PM AEST
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This is a very nice poem...and I loved reading it...it was great...Keep writing...
JAMIE

Re: Shades Display Instantly (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:55:54 PM AEST
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I found this very interesting. I had to read it twice tho to understand it better. Just wanted to let you know tho, that I like it.

Re: Shades Display Instantly (User Rating: 1 )
by Mouth on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:44:07 PM AEST
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Breathtaking, absoulutly magnificent. Prose of a true poet. Love it!

Sarah

Re: Shades Display Instantly (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:23:43 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem!! Very good! Vivid imagery! I lovef it!! Great talent!
Anne :D

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