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Array ( [sid] => 32656 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Great time with you [time] => 2004-01-25 08:49:41 [hometext] => me and my friend had some really good times........we bascically saw each other grow and were always there for one anothor.......its amazing how one little thing can tear us apart. [bodytext] => we talked of times we thought we'd have,
we always said we'd be friends till the end.
You'd be my maid of honour,
you'd be my babsitter.
We'd visit from time to time,
to share old memories.
But now when i look at the pictures,
i see a past i will never forget,
casue as we sit beside each other,
and hate each other forever,
i can still smile and say,
i had a great time with you.
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Great time with you

Contributed by gery_giggles on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 08:49:41 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

we talked of times we thought we'd have,
we always said we'd be friends till the end.
You'd be my maid of honour,
you'd be my babsitter.
We'd visit from time to time,
to share old memories.
But now when i look at the pictures,
i see a past i will never forget,
casue as we sit beside each other,
and hate each other forever,
i can still smile and say,
i had a great time with you.

Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2004-01-25 08:49:41]
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Re: Great time with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 09:16:29 AM AEST
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Oh how sad! Even I had once a friend and now we're sort of enemies. I'm sorry for you I know the feeling amd the poem described it well. Great write!
Anne :D

Re: Great time with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 12:52:02 PM AEST
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Lovely write but oh so sad... I hope you find what you once had..... It sounded so special....
Jenni

Re: Great time with you (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:36:59 PM AEST
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That is such a sad poem...and I know exactly where you're coming from...It's a great poem...Inspirational if you ask me...Thank You...You taught me a lesson with this poem...again..thanx...
Jamie

Re: Great time with you (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:56:27 PM AEST
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I know where you're coming from as well... funny how things work out sometimes, isn't it? Great write.

~ Moonlit

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