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Array ( [sid] => 32646 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WORKING ON ME [time] => 2004-01-25 06:41:08 [hometext] => Written: 1/05/90 started finding my own beliefs [bodytext] => Hey look people can't you see?
He's working, working, on me,
When something needs fixen
rejuvanation's I'm getting.

God's working, working on me.
Pretty soon he'll fix it, see?
Look people just let me be.
he's working, working on me.

My look might be bear
or clothes that I wear.
The road that we travel
may be sometime unravel.

Everyone stumbles even falls
his hands still catch us all.
Your cross is not the same
nor either is our Earthly fame.

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WORKING ON ME

Contributed by emystar on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:41:08 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Hey look people can't you see?
He's working, working, on me,
When something needs fixen
rejuvanation's I'm getting.

God's working, working on me.
Pretty soon he'll fix it, see?
Look people just let me be.
he's working, working on me.

My look might be bear
or clothes that I wear.
The road that we travel
may be sometime unravel.

Everyone stumbles even falls
his hands still catch us all.
Your cross is not the same
nor either is our Earthly fame.





Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-01-25 06:41:08]
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Re: WORKING ON ME (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:47:13 AM AEST
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"his hands still catch us all..
very much uplifting..love it..
venkat


Re: WORKING ON ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 11:18:00 AM AEST
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Very good and so inspirational....
Hugs
jenni


Re: WORKING ON ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 02:39:09 PM AEST
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Emy this was great to read. You did an excellent job on this one. Kie


Re: WORKING ON ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:00:26 AM AEST
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This was powerful to me. I liked it. I hope you make it back to good or even better perfect in god's light. May all your days be blessed.




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