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The feeling isn't the same without seeing the expressions on his face.
Sometimes I wish I could go through the phone,and say he's my true love.
He's not like the other boys he's all of the above.
He doesn't need to talk about sex to make himself look or feel good.
I guess that's one of the reasons why I love him.
This boy is sexy in his own way,and lets me know I'm needed without him saying a thing.
I feel special because I'm a part of his world.
He treats me good,and he doesn't pamper me too much.
I feel his love surrounding me,and I can't get enough! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 249 [topic] => 48 [informant] => parisstcair [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

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Contributed by parisstcair on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 02:44:34 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I miss him so much,but I talk to him every day.
The feeling isn't the same without seeing the expressions on his face.
Sometimes I wish I could go through the phone,and say he's my true love.
He's not like the other boys he's all of the above.
He doesn't need to talk about sex to make himself look or feel good.
I guess that's one of the reasons why I love him.
This boy is sexy in his own way,and lets me know I'm needed without him saying a thing.
I feel special because I'm a part of his world.
He treats me good,and he doesn't pamper me too much.
I feel his love surrounding me,and I can't get enough!

Copyright © parisstcair ... [ 2004-01-25 02:44:34]
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Re: More to come (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:08:44 AM AEST
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Very powerfull, creative, awesome luv vibes.
One can feel how luv should be in this write..
He treats me good, and doesn't pamper me to much. Your man is fortunate 2 have your luv as women like u are few-n-far between.
U show your luv for him in many ways but your unselfish thoughts about him not pampering u 2 much.
that's what shows how dearly u do luv him.
I've only had that kindda a luv in my life with one male, my Tarzan.
Open-n-honest is the only way 2 fly.
Pat yourself on the back for this write!
Hope he realizes what a gem he has.
Huggs, luv,
emy
Oh one more thing your poem gives me hopes that not all luv has gone sower.

Re: More to come (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 09:11:42 AM AEST
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WoW! Great poem! It's good to hear that true love still exist somewhere :)
Anne :D

Re: More to come (User Rating: 1 )
by kieran on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 02:44:58 PM AEST
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i'm amazed people still feel like this. I thought the fashionable thing to do was to have self abusive disfunctional relationships. Maybe for me. Good honest emotional depth, you can feel the love there. Some of the rhymes feel a little forced though, you should consider a slightly different style than ryming couplets. still...pretty damn good.

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