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I sit on my bed and cry
at times I wish I were in a tomb
why'd you leave me here to die
the sun will rise and the sun will set
bring forth another black day
my life I feel is just another bet
nothing goes my way
I have failed my friends and family too
my decisions always depend on the support
given by you
you're always there for me
to help me through
now I can see a friendship so true [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 36 [informant] => sweetpeall [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Dark Places

Contributed by sweetpeall on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 11:21:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Sitting in a pitch dark room
I sit on my bed and cry
at times I wish I were in a tomb
why'd you leave me here to die
the sun will rise and the sun will set
bring forth another black day
my life I feel is just another bet
nothing goes my way
I have failed my friends and family too
my decisions always depend on the support
given by you
you're always there for me
to help me through
now I can see a friendship so true

Copyright © sweetpeall ... [ 2004-01-24 23:21:06]
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Re: Dark Places (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:19:31 AM AEST
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True friends are invaluable. Nicely written.

Re: Dark Places (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 01:35:57 PM AEST
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I loved how your story was told

A friend brought you out to see the light

Fantastic

Well done

Keep smiling and stay in the light
Love Angelxxx

Re: Dark Places (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:15:04 PM AEST
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Almost hopeful in the end of it... Very sorrowful feel to it all the way through. It was an interesting write. I liked it though. Sometimes you aren't failing as much as you think you are though.

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