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something that has been passed around
I want to jump off a building
and crash into the ground
my heart is so broken
I don't know what to do
please don't forget
I will always love you
I can't go on living this life
I have no choice
but to pick up the knife
I know this will cause
some people in pain
but I feel so empty
I think I am insane
I love you so much
and that's no lie
but I give up and want to die
you deserve so much better
you deserve so much more
I pick up the gun
and fall to the floor
I guess this is where everything has to end
you were a great guy
and a wonderful friend
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Depression Takes Over

Contributed by sweetpeall on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 04:04:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I feel like a piece of trash
something that has been passed around
I want to jump off a building
and crash into the ground
my heart is so broken
I don't know what to do
please don't forget
I will always love you
I can't go on living this life
I have no choice
but to pick up the knife
I know this will cause
some people in pain
but I feel so empty
I think I am insane
I love you so much
and that's no lie
but I give up and want to die
you deserve so much better
you deserve so much more
I pick up the gun
and fall to the floor
I guess this is where everything has to end
you were a great guy
and a wonderful friend

Copyright © sweetpeall ... [ 2004-01-24 16:04:22]
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Re: Depression Takes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 05:20:15 PM AEST
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good write... but just remember no one is worth dying for...

Re: Depression Takes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:08:02 PM AEST
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In agreement with the first comment, but I can relate to this totally keep on writing. i loved the poem all around

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Depression Takes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:06:54 PM AEST
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Good write. If you can love then you aren't empty. Maybe just a little numb. I know these feelings all too well.

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